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Took these just yesterday...:]

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I like all of them but the second tree and the flowers. The tree is over-exposed to light, although the light streaming down is a nice effect on both of the trees. When taking pictures like this, don't look up the tree, just take a step back and make sure you don't get that overly white part.
The flowers aren't as interesting as some of the other pictures. Sure, the raindrops are nice, but there's bits of dead and drooping flower everywhere. Not good and not pretty.

Anyway, keep snapping because you're definately good at it! I love the shadow, the sky, the first tree, the other tree, they're all beautiful!

Keep snapping! I'll be looking for more of your work!

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Thanks, yaah those flowers ae dying i just thought i'd get a picture of them before they actually did. But i agree, they aren't as interesting as the others. And the tree picture, i just thought it looked cool.
Thanks for your comment!! :] as i said it is much appreciated.
And i will definitely keep snapping, its too fun to stop!!
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Thanks again!


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Wow, I like these. I've always liked nature pictures, and I think part of the reason I really like these is because of how happy they look and how much sunlight there is. It reminds me of when I used to live in California, haha. These are all really pretty and you live in such a pretty place. :)
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Hi there girl!

Obviously, you’ve edited these but I think you may have over edited them which is something to be careful of. When you over edit a picture, especially when you add light and contrast, the picture can seem very harsh, and this applied to all of them though in the two pictures of the flowers and the sky, this is a little less noticeable.

So really, my only recommendation is to be careful when you edit pictures because it can definitely be overdone. You had great ideas, you just have to be careful.
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Thanks for all of your comments. :)
And I will try to be careful.
Thanks everyone!!!


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Hi! I like these. Good job.

Just a few things: They are pretty blurry. If your camera has a macro setting, try using that for the up close picks. If not, just try to move your hands a bit less.

Compositionally, these are ok, but they could be better--after all, there are lots of pictures of flowers. What makes your unique?

Also, try to keep all of the flower in the frame, or it looks like half is cut off.

Remember--compositions will usually be stronger if you place the subject a little off center. (For example, in the picture of the shadow, it's exactly in the middle, which isn't as interesting.)

Hope this helps!

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Down to business:

1. The sun is to bright it draws way to much attention. There is just way too much going on. I really like the bird, but it took me like two minutes to notice it.

2. I love this. You could experiment doing the same kind of photo against different backgrounds. Just play around with it :)

3. I really, really LOVE this. But, there is lots of distractions in the background. I like the way the sun comes through the tree/leaves. It is beautiful.

4. I like this. The way everything looks. But, there is now focus.

5. /6. I liked 5 better than I liked 6. The water in the upper right hand corner of 5 is distracting, but not awful. I think you could find a better angle for 6. Flowers are boring, and it is really hard to make them seem original.

7. This is a bit grainy and again there is no focus.

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