lol hey art

So I know my stuff is questionable at best, but I have a couple of pieces I'd like some crit on.

One is uploaded, the other is a link because YWS is being wonky and won't let me upload it.

http://i48.tinypic.com/10gfhic.jpg

My computer won't let me on this site could you upload them as attachments?

A. S.

Critiquing: The six dudes one, they all look straight up and down. Generally with male proportions, their waists are smaller the farther down they go. As for the Bright Light, her forehead sinks in a bit too much. Her nose AND lips go out farther.

Overall opinion: I like them! You're pretty good! The second guy off the right is my favorite. I would probably act the same as that girl in Bright Light: "Ooh, shiny..."

@Arahnia I posted them

@RazHuni thanks for that! I was practicing some male anatomy in this picture, and I found it difficult to find a balance between making the chests bigger and not making it looklike they have curvy hips Any advice for finding a right balance?

and as for BrightLight - right. Wonky profile, I gotta work on that

Hey, I love the one you uploaded. I can't do art so I don't really have any advice. I just noticed that some of the eyebrows were above the hair. This makes it look really unrealistic! Wish I could have helped more

A. S.