My Drawings

Can you tell me what I've done well and what to improve on please! Which one's your favorite? Thank's!

Toy Room: http://locheart.deviantart.com/art/Toy-Room-164848980

In Wonderland: http://locheart.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2nfxzz

Mad Nursery Rhymeshttp://locheart.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2o1zo6

I don't Dream in Colorhttp://locheart.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2p14w8

The Epic Phone Callhttp://locheart.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2mqe4c

These are all really good. Although this art style may be a bit overused I think you have potential. Some of those must have taken forever to make. O_O I like them.

Wow. That's just... really amazing. How do you have the patience for all that? It looks great, but wow that must have taken a long time. On average how long did it take you to draw those?

"I Don't Dream in Color" is a bit too cluttered for my tastes, but I really loved all the others, particularly "The Epic Phone Call." "In Wonderland" was another favorite. Really great job! You have some incredible talent.

Hello.

Well, I like your drawings; they're amazing, and very cool. Gosh, you're good at this. I am wondering how long it took you to finish all those drawings? I love all your drawings, gee, I'm a bit jealous with your talent. Nah, just kidding.

Keep drawing, you're brilliant!

-darkangel_05

My only real criticism is nothing really stands out; there's no focal point in any of it. Mumbo-jumbo is good for doodling, but with a legitimate piece you need a central focus.

On the other hand, you have clean lines and this is good art. Keep drawing!

Hi! I think they are Awsome but I have one thing to say...when you draw in pencil, don't smudge the pencil lead. It's a bad habit. Well other than that, it was Awsome!

These are all great!

They remind me of my favorite manga!

These are all cute. However I have to agree with DarkAngel because these were just random well done doodles. It was overcrowded and nearly all of them looked the same.

However, I still loved them. Have you even considered being a manga artist?

Lots of , Nepo!

WOW. I can't choose a favourite, they all have so much detail. You are clearly extremely talented

Hiya, Night. I'm KD, and I'll be your reviewer today!

Okay, I think we all here can all agree one thing here: your detail work is amazing! You give our eyes so much to examine, look at, marvel at, think about, and understand. You give our eyes so much to feast on!
Now let's review each drawing one by one.

#1: This is pretty cool, I have to say. I love how the toys hanging off of the ceiling are transparent, and how this room (Toyland, a place filled with everything a child wants) is absolutely filled to the brim with toys and other things. It's exactly how a kid's toyland would probably look like! So here, I don't really mind how the kid isn't that noticeable, since Toyland is so messy and jammed pack with stuff. I can't quite tell my feelings about the circle design you scatter and carry through the whole picture; it's quite interesting. (Bty, work on your cubes. They look a little funky up there. Hehe.)

#2: Hm. Sorry, but I don't really like this one much. I don't like how, as luna said, you don't have any focal points in this piece. And having no focal points and making this piece look cluttered and jammed with things in this case does not add in any way to the picture, this time, in my opinion. Having everything blend in with each other and having the page filled with gazillions of things drives my mind absolutely crazy! (Especially when there are no white spaces between each objects...) Color would probably help in this case, a little. While my eye is trying to concentrate on one thing, it's getting nagged by another complicated object near by, so I can't quite focus on anything. But the thing is, this may be your style. But I don't know if it works well in this picture, specifically.
To also improve this piece, I think it would be nicer if there was more organization to everything in there. And what, exactly, does everything in here all have to do with each other? Well, they're all from Wonderland. That's it. It would be nicer if you had more of a theme, or message to your pictures if they're filled to the brim with things. Or, make the page a little less cluttered.

3#: Now this is what I like. I like this one much better than the last, since there's much less things in this drawing. It calms my eye down after looking at the one before it. Ahhhh...very nice shading! I especially love how the left corner of the drawing is all black; great contrast. Haha, I'm still trying to find all the nursery rhymes. This may take a while...*squints at screen*

#4: Very interesting. You've got some nice patterns goin' there! Again, I think adding some contrast/color to the man would make him stand out a bit better, but that may not be what you want.

#5: This one is my favorite, because *drum roll*: OF THE CONTRAST! Haha, I love the black border around people, making them stand out. I love the collage look to this, and the names in the right corner of the page.

Overall:

Oh, I'm sorry if I sound mean! Because, lol, I'm really not! I hope you know that you are really talented. Keep up that nice detail work! Keep on drawing, hope I helped-

KD

They are all really good, but except for the last one, everything just kinda blended together. It was hard to tell one part from another. Otherwise they were great! Keep going!