Garden flower (and a random eye)

A drawing i did today in my garden. i used a charcoal crayon and a Royal graphite pencil (B).



There's also a random eye i decided to draw, but i did that before the flower. xD
I wrote some french on it as well.
'Les yeux'.
Une fleur dans le jardin.
élevage sur la barrière

I love the flower; very realistic. The only thing I could find wrong with the eye is that the eyelashes look too separated/far apart from each other. The flower would look nice with some color, but it's perfect the way it is too. Also, with the French, maybe you could make the words take up the entire background? Like write them really, really lightly behind the flower and the eye instead of around them?

Great work, though and keep drawing.

Embee

awe thanks, i know, my eyeslashes come out really weird. so i make them big and clumpy... i'll change that. thanks though!

This is very good.

The flowers are very drawn. Your a very talented sketcher and at showing the light and shade in the flowers, which is difficult to do.
The eye is also very good, I'd like to see what it would look like if you add a face to it.
Also I would encourage you to add some colour to this, I'd love to see what the flowers and the eye would look like with some colour
Keep going with this your very good

Verawinters

Hi Mystical. I liked the flower you made, its very neat and sweet. But the thing is that had you made it bigger, I would have liked it. Looks now that you made a flower in the side somewhere(sorry if its not making any sense to you.) And as for French, i don;t know the language so can you translate it for me.
Keep sketching!

~Shubhi

Hello Mystic!

Well, let's begin.
1.The eye. It needs more work on the lashes and the iris. Eyes are the toughest objects to draw, but if executed well, it does look the most beautiful. Be more gentle with the strokes for the lashes.
2. Flower. You've done some pretty good shading here. Work on the stem more. It seems to rigid and lifeless. You could bring more depth into the flower, as the petals bend into the peduncle.

Good work, though.
Keep drawing.

~Lava

I love the flower. It's very realistic while my flowers are just circles with half ovals and straight lines O.o. It's beaitfully done bu tI could hardly see any detail. However the shape is magnificent (Hope I spelled that right). The eye is great. It looks realistic, but very small and why is it with the flower? there are great, but I would love more detail. Other then that, it was beautfully done!

Ciao!