MY NEW CRIT LIST

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So, unfortunately my boy and I had to part ways; I am in France right now, up in the mountains far from everything really, but I do have a comp, unlimited net access, and ample amounts of time on my hands. So I've gone back to doing proper crits. I just have to figure out how to work the scanner. So here is the new list, the pieces that I have down to work on. If you would like me to look at a piece of yours, PM me or leave a note here. There are also others I've finished which I will be getting to their propective authors after scanning.

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habiter est un parte de mort - Brad
Digging at My Heart - skeptik_225
Untitled - PsyLynx
I Was His Slave - niteowl
My Trigger Finger - Rincewind
I'll Lower My Voice... - Inertia
Alien Reflection - Natyr Lucio
Chaucer Piece - timjim77
Cold Coffee - xantham gum
HaHa (Meet Nurse) - zelithon
he plays with fire - Chanson
life in a tAbk - Inertia
Schizm - PsyLynx
Social Omnipotence - Inertia
Techno-Marriage - torsa_n_muse
Vision - torsa_n_muse
The Third Bullet (maestro) - Liz
poems - Kwestion22
Distance - Matt
To Dear Old Dad - marching_gurl
Twelve Days of Christmas... - Areida
Last edited by Caligula's Launderette on Sat Dec 17, 2005 7:05 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Ooh, could you crit my poem Distance please? I really need some help and it only has one comment.
Matt.




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Could you please crit my poem To Dear Old Dad. Its in dramtic poetry.
~*~Peace, Love, and Protesters~*~
I'm not off beat!I'm marching to the beat of my own drum
I rock my socks
Hippielicious the bold new flavor from caroline
JFK BLOWN AWAY WHAT ELSE DO I HAVE TO SAY!!!!!!!




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You're a brave person to ask if people want anything critiqued.... Vewwy brave.

Having said that, stick me on the list for The Twelve Days of Christmas: Prologue and The Twelve Days of Christmas Ch. 1 and 2. Thanks. :D
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