Escapees (Splash of Color)

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Rayen
Rayen’s eyes opened in the middle of a dead sleep. Where am I? her waking mind thought. While trying to remember, her gray eyes wandered over to the only light source in the room, a blinking red 7:10. Then she remembered she was at the Rest for Less Motel in Chicago. With a big sigh she rolled out of bed. The little beasts will awake soon. I better get some food or else I’ll have to hear about how they’re all dying of starvation she thought as she grabbed a room key and walked out the door. Rayen spotted the big yellow arch right next to the motel, or as she saw it the promise of cheap food. We haven’t eaten in two days, so I should probably get a lot of happy meals, and a couple salads, Silas won’t eat any meat.

Twenty minutes later Rayen was in and out of McDonalds. She had two salads tucked under her arms and happy meals looped around six of her fingers. As she waddled to the room a thought came to her mind, fifteen year olds should be hanging out with friends/a boyfriend, watching movies, staying up late, and learning how to drive. Not always watching little kids alone. Then again Rayen wasn’t your average teen, and neither were her charges.

Rayen silently slipped the key into the slot, and slowly opened the door. Unaware of the newcomer Skye, who sat in front of the TV staring with her green eyes as Barney flickered across ageing screen. Next to Skye, Holly was attempting to braid her brown hair. Suddenly she was noticed, a small furry object pummeled into her

“Food!” it screamed.

“Shh, Silas, Jack’s still sleeping,” Holly whispered glancing at the motionless body slumped on the floor. Ignoring her, Silas stood up on his hind legs and made his blue eyes look like overflowing pools of love.

“Knock it off Silas, you get your food in human form as always,” Rayen said firmly. The dog rolled its flaming eyes and melted into a boy. He resembled the human heap on the carpet, except the fact that Silas actually looked alive. Rayen divvied up the food between the children and the gently asked “Jack, are you hungry?”

“Jack, Jack, Jack that’s who you are always worried about. He’s asleep, it doesn’t matter what you say to him. Observe: Jack, it is your fault that Michael was hurt and couldn’t keep up. You should have ported us out of there at the first sign of danger,” Silas said as he stuffed his smug face with salad.

“Silas I know it was my fault. Rayen, I’m not hungry. Just sad, but thanks anyways,” said Jack as he flopped up into a loose sitting position. His smooth face was exactly like Silas’s, but Jack’s eyes were black, never ending tunnel with no end black. Silas paused from inhaling the food, and offered Jack a fistful of squished green. “No thank you,” Jack muttered. He changed the subject, “Rayen did Holly tell you that she saw the seekers this morning?”

“You did?” Rayen asked. Please no, we just lost Michael, Jack can’t handle this, not now. Not ever. Please, please let Jack be lying Rayen prayed silently. But Jack never lied, never, ever.

“Yes,” said Holly here green eyes troubled.

“Are you sure?” Holly nodded slowly. Crap, we have to check out. Leave. Now.

“Pack your stuff up, we’ll leave in ten minutes,” Rayen commanded, “You will never go back to the Center, this life is better than that right?” They all nodded but none met her eyes. Up at the check in I guess I’ll say there was a death in the family so we can’t stay. Sob stories always work the best. Rayen thought as she stuffed all of her belongings in a scruffy blue backpack.

Rayen ambled down a cobblestoned corner. The rain poured down from the gray sky and soaked her. Her spiky antlers were covered up by a loose striped beanie. She had an umbrella with her, but it was protecting Silas and the others with their little suitcases who walked in front of her under a rainbow canopy. Rayen herded them down the streets the way a sheepdog shepherds a flock of sheep. Her flock was a mix- match bunch of kids. An abnormal sight on the streets of Chicago.

“Holly, where are they?” Rayen asked

“About two hundred and fifty yards away from us and closing in,” Holly said with her green eyes squinting in concentration.

“Silas, Skye, I need you to be ready, if they get us I want you to run.” Rayen said

“We will be ready.” Silas mumbled

“Two hundred yards,” Holly said under her breath.

“Jack? Are you ready?” Rayen asked.

“I ca… can’t,” Jack stuttered

“Remember what happened last time you said that?” Silas said, “We lost Michael,”

“100 yards, they’re running now,” Holly said. They heard shouts coming closer mixing with the roar of the thunder.

“Jack you need to try,” Rayen demanded. Clap, clap, clap the feet got nearer.

“Okay,” Jack said with a mix of tears and rain streaming down his face, “Look in my eyes,”

They all stared into his deep eyes, and then they were gone, the blackness had taken over them. The forgotten umbrella danced in a puddle; the only reminder of the group, a splash of color in the gray.

Michael

Click, Click, Click black stilettos paced across the smooth tile. A pair of Elmo shoes followed close behind.

“When do I get to see my Momma?” Michael questioned the wearer of the stilettos with his big brown eyes.

“I’m your Mommy know,” Scar said in a pleasant voice.

“But you don’t have antlers and mommas have antlers,” Michael pointed out. Scar sighed and a pair of short antlers popped out of her coffee colored hair.

“That’s the wrong kind.” Michael said shaking his tiny head. The antlers stretched into a tall rack.

“What else does a Mommy need?” Scar inquired.

“She needs her name to be Rayen,” Michael answered. Michael blinked and suddenly Rayen was standing there.

“Baby, it’s me!” Rayen exclaimed with her arms spread out.

“What happened to your face?” Michael whispered, shyly pointing at the long scar stretching across her face.

“I got into some trouble coming to get you, I barely made it out.” Rayen frowned.

“Good guys always win!” Michael exclaimed.

“Who said I’m the good guy?” Rayen questioned him.

“You came to save me, and good guys do that. Bad guys hurt people and kidnap people,” Michael said frowning.

“What if the good guy hurt the bad guy before the bad guy was bad?” Rayen inquired.
Oh no! I'm going into the cave. Wha... Call m... Lat... I'm... *Turns phone off* Yes lost them!




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Aw, I really like this. Is there more, or is this simply a short story type of thing? I would definitely read more if there was any, haha. Anyways, I don't see anything wrong with this, but I'm sure someone else will do a good review for you. All I wanted to do was compliment you and say that it's wonderful! Off to a good start, keep writing!

~Shaard
I hate cynicism -- it's my least favorite quality and it doesn't lead anywhere. Nobody in life gets exactly what they thought they were going to get. But if you work really hard and you're kind, amazing things will happen. I'm telling you, amazing things will happen. - Conan O'Brien




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Thanks TigerShaard,

There's more :D , it's just not as organized as this. It's forming quite slowly, but I'm working on it. :smt001


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Oh no! I'm going into the cave. Wha... Call m... Lat... I'm... *Turns phone off* Yes lost them!



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