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The Plot

A group of friends have stuck together for nearly all their lives. Not because they always get along and not because they like to hang out with each other. Some get along and some do not. It doesn't matter, because they know they have to stick together because of their gifts.

Each person in the group of teenagers were born with a powerful gift. Maybe the ability to control an element, or maybe transportation. Either way, they were given it to fight the forces of another world. They know of their destiny simply because when they turned thirteen years old they were visited by pixie. Rare and pure creatures of another world. They are immortal and because of that, they don't reproduce. However the parallel world they control forces are starting to revolt. There is not enough Pixies to control the other world.

So they choose ten (maybe less or more, depends if this is popular or not) teenagers from New York City, because that's where the final battle is rumored to be, gave them a gift and told them to practice it because one day the pixies wouldn't be able to hold off the forces of the other world. The pixies choose them because they had no other choice. They then introduced the teenagers to each other and told them to stick with each other, protecting each with their own lives. Because if one dies, every one's powers are weakened. They need each other. So the group must stick together and practice always dreading and waiting the return of the pixies who cursed them with this power.

That day is very soon. The teenagers will only have the Pixies warning before the other creatures come to Earth and try to destroy mankind - wanting Earth for themselves.

The creatures of the other world include, vampires, elves, pixies, werewolves, wizards, etc.

Characters

What I want from your characters:
    Unusual
    Flawed
    The "best friend" technique

Unusual characters - these characters are the ones who you can rarely understand. They think in completely different ways then anyone else. Therefore, it makes them one of the hardest to create.
Deeply flawed characters - for me, personally, deeply flawed characters are the most fun to create. There are far too many characters out there who are either perfect, or almost perfect with only a few flaws. Then, the flaws our characters do have, get lost and you don't write about them enough. Please highlight the flaws because I grow to love character because of their flaws.
"Best friend" technique - not all characters are born leaders. In fact, in this storybook, I want no leaders. Our characters will work together with no one in charge. However, if one of your characters flaws is that they like to take charge of a situation nearly always, that would work. But he or she wouldn't actually be in charge. (;

Also, I am going to steal this idea from others, but I would like to approve your character profile first. Please post your profile in the DT first and once I say it's good, you can post it here. Sorry to be so picky, but I'd like this to last. :D

Here are the characters available:
    Female - controlling animals will; speaking with animals (Taken by: untameabletiger)
    Male - mind control; mind reading (Taken by: DayDreams)
    Female - conjuring (Taken by: WhiteTiger93)
    Male - creating illusions; can see through illusions/lies (Calimed by: Texanwriter)
    Male - teleportation-can teleport others as well as himself; creating force fields
    Male - Telekinesis; psychokinesis
    Female - Can 'speak' with technology and make it do what she wants; almost super intelligent (Taken by: Gsppcrock10)
    Female - Can paint the future; see an objects history by touching it (Claimed by: Kidashka)
    Female - Can go back or forward in time by a weeks span
    Male - Shape shift (Claimed by: Elinor Brynn

If you have a power you'd rather use (or any questions about the powers), run it by me in the DT and I'll say if it's okay or not. (; This is basically to ensure the character ratio stays even.

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Strengths:
Flaws:
Personality:
Other:

Rules

All YWS rules apply!
-NO God modding
-Cussing is okay, don't make it unnecessary please.
-Romance is fine, sex scenes is a big no-no!
-No chat speak
-Please make your posts at least 250 characters. If you can't make it that long, chances are, it's not that important.
-If you don't post for your character within the first 2 weeks, I will take over it or give it to someone else (if they want it). With that said, please don't claim a character unless you really want it.

Other

If you have any questions, please ask me in the DT! :) OR PM me, even. However, let's not clutter this thread if we can help it. :) Please use the DT to claim a character as well. And, I think I mentioned, post your character in the DT for my approval. I won't be too hard, I just want to see you put in the effort to make a good character. :)

Also, sorry if I sound harsh, but I really want this storybook to last.

Let's get started!

Link to the DT:
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Last edited by WhiteTiger93 on Sun May 30, 2010 7:20 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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We'll take about 2 more characters and then we'll start this. :)
(Also, if you've already posted a profile and it's been approved, please feel free to post it in this thread now! :D)
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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Name: Aron Swift

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Appearance: A slightly muscular teen with brown hair that goes down to his eyebrows on the front and just to his neck on the back. His eyes are a hazel color that usually is near the brown of his hair, but sometimes he is told it looks more green. Mostly wears regular T-shirts and avoids designer clothing at all times.

Power: mind control; mind reading

Power Strengths: Very good at reading minds, but his mind control lacks. The only times when he can successfully control a mind is when he is driven by a lot of emotion. Other than that he can't control other's minds.

Strengths: He is in shape, and can perform almost any physical task that he is given. An excellent team player who likes to follow a leader.

Flaws: Aron doesn't like heights at all and cannot stand to look over cliffs. Although he is a good team player he isn't much of a thinker and often leaves the job of coming up with ideas to others. Refuses to control the minds of others for unjust reasons.

Personality: A very easy going guy who usually has a positive attitude. Not much puts a damper on his happy and joking attitude, and he loves making friends with everyone. In a conversation he usually doesn't offer any ideas, but can keep people entertained.

Other: He is up for love.
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Name: April Green

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Appearance: She has golden blonde hair and forest green eyes. She has clear, tan skin and a thin face. She's short and too skinny. She looks almost frail and not at all physically able.

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Power: Conjuring - the ability to create things out of thin air.

Personality: She's sarcastic and bitter. She has an almost morbid sense of humor and looks down on the world. April lives in a foster home with five other kids, all younger then her. She is stuck with baby sitting and she can't stand it. Although, when she loosens up, she's pretty fun. However, most people only hear her sarcastic and uncaring attitude.

Strengths: She is a force to be messed with. If you make her mad, you'll regret it because she will stop at nothing to get back at you. She is a fighter, not a lover. xD She has a fair amount of control over her power, although when it goes wrong she tries much harder to practice it to be perfect. She's very determined and ambitious.

Flaws: She's weak, physically. She's out of shape and, although many of the others work not only on their powers but on being physically fit, April doesn't. Just works on her powers. She also can't control her powers in stressful situations. She has difficulty concentrating, especially if she's worried. April is bitter and selfish. She's had to share her whole life because she lives in a foster home. She hates that and she has a low tolerance for kids and crying. She loves sarcasism but doesn't know when it's not needed. She's made jealous very easily.

Other: She's actually a good person (she really wants to be a good person) and yes, she's up for love....

If you can stand her. xD
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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Name: Kaycee

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Appearance: 5:10 and thin. http://i45.tinypic.com/ehgnyf.jpg

Power: control animals will. Talk to animals.

Personality: Sarcastic and sassy but is unusually optimistic and creative. Middle child between an older brother and younger sister who do not know about her powers.

Strengths: Kaycee is very outspoken, and can easily cheer up anyone down. Always prepared and she always remains determined to reach her high standards.

Flaws: Despite her personality she is a perfectionist and is very pessimistic towards herself and enemies. Kaycee has a big temper and gets set off easily which can result in hurting those around her. Her stressful situations often result in mental breakdowns.Her fears include: heights, needles, and hurting someone she loves

Other: She is up for love! She is sick of acting the opposite of her feelings




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Can I join?
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I don't see why not Forsaken. The more the Merrier
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Of course you can. Please post your profile and I'll look it over in the DT.

However, I'd really appreciate it if you took on the part of one of the guys. We'll be starting this soon since it appears not many more are going to join. (;

Maybe some will join after we start.
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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sorry, i really dont think i should join...
Last edited by ForsakenAngel on Sun May 30, 2010 3:29 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Um, forsakin...DayDreams already claimed the one with mindcontrol. I'm sorry.
You can still join but I'd really appreciate it if you put the profile in the DT so I can approve it.
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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sorry, but i really dont think i should join...
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Okay. Thanks for the interest anyway. :)

Everyone, we're going to start this tonight when I get off work. I'm going to PM everone a little later. I can't wait!
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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April - Conjuring

She lounged on her off white couch, yawning and stretching her arms above her head. She hadn't really practiced her power lately, but she felt too tired to do it now.

"Apirl, I'm thirsty," Kaycee told her. "Can you just conjure me up a Dr. Pepper?"

"Sure," April said, closing her eyes and picturing the dark liquid.

There was a shout and April's eyes opened, her concentration broke. She laughed at the puddle on the floor. Apparently, she had forgotten to conjure a glass with the soda.

"Sorry about that," April laughed, picturing the Dr. Pepper in a glass this time.

Kaycee rolled her eyes but took the new cup of conjured soda, gratefully.

"Did you invite the others to come?" Kaycee asked, smacking her lips and putting the glass down. "We do need to practice our powers together."

April nodded. "I did. They should be here any minute now. I'm pretty sure that-"

The doorbell rang and both girls got up to go see who had come to practice now.
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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Amelia - Tech Whisperer

Amelia was standing- well, sitting, at the door, one hand on one of the wheels of her wheelchair to keep herself from rolling off of the porch. The door opened and she looked up at April. "You really need to put in a ramp or something. I'm getting tired of asking for help from joggers and people like that."

April rolled her eyes slightly. "Sorry Amelia." She and Kaycee moved, and she rolled herself into the house. She was wearing a form-fitting black t-shirt that said "For the Horde!" in red lettering.

She sighed, looking from April to Kaycee. "None of the others have gotten here yet?"
Just another quack spouting psychobabble.

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Kaycee-Animal control



Kaycee glanced up with Amelia's words, automatically looking out the door, as if she would find someone/something waiting for her. Shaking her head she replied, " No , not yet, unless you you brought someone." Her gaze returned to the door as she closed it.

A short click, surprisingly loud, echoed in her head as a sharp pain went through her left arm, this had been happening for what she could remember of her lifetime. Something bad was about to happen. This feeling had never been wrong, but she couldn't imagine why only she knew.

"We have to go, NOW." Kaycee said, swallowing the fear of how the results may turn out. The other didn't question her, instead, they started toward a small room at the end of the hall, just as the wooden door pushed open with incredible force.



The roots of education are bitter, but the fruit is sweet.
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