It's been a while =O

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So I haven't really drawn anything since I graduated high school, and I picked up my sketchbook and drew something =O It's kinda rusty (especially the two that are together. They are horrible, so you have no need to comment on them XD) And the the chick was just some good fun with positions, and yes, I know she is missing an arm.

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That should do it. ^.^
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Ok Flower here to be your reviewer for today. I know you mentioned this, but why is she missing an arm?
Her eyes seem to just disapear, they have to emotion, or anything.

Her elbow just sinks into her leg, when in reality it would not.

Love the dress but I would make the straps darker.

The bottom of her shoe seems really awkward, I would make it get smaller toward the end of the shoe.

Her hair falls over her body nicely, I like it but I think that it would look better shaded in.

On her dress why does at the upper leg the dress seems to come up when it should fall flat?
Other than that I love this, nice job.

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Yo Angel!

It is quite good. I like your style.
Besides what Flower said, here's what I'd like to add.

The part where the hair is partitioned needs to be worked on a bit. It seems like there's nothing beneath the hair. Try to show some scalp.
The elbow needs working.
The couple:
The girl's dress seems to hang down weirdly.

That's bout it. Keep drawing.
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Oh my goodness i love these! The girl is my favourite, and you hardly notice she's missing and arm anyway. Ok, I'll try and review, but i'm not very good at it. :D
The hair towards the parting should generally be much darker than the rest of her hair. Her elbow is a bit strange, but that's ok! It works with your style!
Overall i love the girl, she's pretty amazing!
Now then, the couple in the back... i can't really see them very well, but the girls feet look like they've been twisted up at an odd angle. Try changing that. :D The faces are great, but i don't like how his nose looks like a beak... also, is there something in his pocket? and hand or a huge bottle of something?
I don't like how her dress is drooping down like there's something weighing it down...
All together, i love these drawings! Can't wait to see more of your work.

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Very pretty. Is her arm behind her, or is she just armless...? I love her hair, its nice, but my favorite part os her face. It's really cool-looking. I suggest giving her something to sit on, so she's not just on air, and an arm. Then this will be great.

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So to answer questions about the arm, i just didn't feel like drawing it XD And I wanted her floating so I could concentrate on her position, rather than the chair, so I'll never add the chair XD

Now...I just need to clarify, the elbow itself isn't funny, the fabric of her sleeve is flowing at the end and hangs over her leg but only partially, so that's why it might look weird, but it's the shading I didn't do to clarify how the fabric goes, because as you can see, I didn't bother much with shading XD

And then, lastly, the fabric at the leg comes up because there's a wrinkle in the fabric, though I didn't shade in the line that should also come from that.

(There's also so much more awkwardness than the dress that hangs on the smaller girl XD)
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