Comic

I was looking over my brother's shoulders while he was reading a comic, and mixed some of what I saw and some things from my imagination into this picture! Hope you like it leave a comment telling me if you do or not!
Thanks! KAH

Hey KAH!

This is pretty cool! I really love the robot cat dinosaur thing, it's awesome.

One suggestion, it's really hard to see, and I know that scans aren't exactly what the picture looks like, but if you are going to post you have to make sure that we can see what it is.

Hi, I'm Puffcherry but you can call me Chrissie! (I'd be rich for every time I have said that on this site...Okay so this is tenth time, but if you gave me a thousand for every time then I'd be rich-sort of- kind of)

Let me start by just saying "Wow!" I haven't ever seen those characters before, or what they look like they degenerate from. I must say though, you are one heck of a good drawer! There is no shading, but who has time for that these days.

This is super awesome. It's a little hard for me to see though. But hey, I'm a little blind anyway. Keep up the great work. I could never make a comic book. But you're doing great!

Hey there, KAH!

These a pretty good! I read comics myself (God, I'm sounding more of a nerd every second) and these are done quite well! I think that if you put them in a comic book style then it would just complete it! I also think that you should copy these but add some colour to it, it just seems that they are sketches so lets make the drawings!


MWAHAHAHA!
-R.O.C.

Hey there, these are pretty good!
I liked the different levels and the wonderful typical robot-cartoon style. One thing did jump out at me, though - or rather, it didn't. I do know that it is probably darker on the original sheet of paper, but scanned it was very pale and kind of hard to see ... Or at least, it was reasonably hard to make out the details. I know you can't change it now, but in future, if you're intending to post something, draw it quite a bit more firmly. Of course, you don't have to listen to me - It's quite likely that I have no idea what I'm talking about.
- Ignis *gives daft smile*