Ok so this is my first drawing to post on YWS!!! I was obviously really bored and had a lot of time on my hands. And this is the product! I don't know what his is supposed to symbolise, or even what it is exactly. And its kind of seem like it's leaning back slightly into the background, so if you notice that the left wing seems a little bigger, dont worry. I did too.
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The only negative thing I have to comment on is the shading. Being an artist myself, I spend a lot of time focusing on the shading. Here, it seems as though you wanted to get this done so quickly you didn't do a very interesting job.
The worst thing about the shading is the lines itself. They aren't going in the same diresction. Especially when doing objects like wings that actually have vertical lines (the feathers) you need to draw them realistically. I realize that this is a cartoon, but usually when professionally coloring on something, if you color the first half in one direction (ie left to right, up to down) then you need to keep it that way. This problem could be solved by simply getting a piece of toilet or tissue paper and smudging the pencil. It becomes a much better shade.
I really like this. The only thing I have to say is like above the shading isn't very good. It's very rushed which makes the picture look bad. Also it looks really yellow. Other than that good job.
-Flower-
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This art is a colorful one. Like the "halo" above the heart and the background too! One thing that I would like to say for the mistaken part are the wings. Yes, the left wing appears to be bigger than the right one but those wings look very simple. Also, I don't know if you're trying to shade or color some parts of the drawing. Anyways, aside from those things, it's really nice and vibrant.
Keep up the good work!
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Wow, I think this is really cool... for a few reasons: 1. The lines inside the heart look awesome, kinda looks the inside of a real heart. 2. The halo : So cute
But like the others said, the shading isn't that great, but apart from that it's pretty cool!
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