Yep!! Quite a bit better! There are still a few things that could be edited, but hey! There is never any possible way to make them perfect... I know for a face mine will never be. Nice work!
Welcome to the site, isn't it awesome? Hope your finding your way around the place, okay. Anyways the piece wasn't horrid or particularly spectacular, but it was okay and I seriously wished it was longer, I saw real potential in this and when I reached the end I was like where's the rest of it?! Anyways like I said it as okay, thank you for the read.
"I became insane,with long intervals of horrible insanity."
"Their ideology is that human nature is fundamentally evil.In other words, humans are evil from the day they are born."
