The Inevitable Weakness: Fear (drawing/painting)

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I think this is really cool. The only thing I'd fix is the pencil lines around the edge...they're scribbly and look like you were just in a hurry to get it done. The whole thing's supposed to be "rough" I'm figuring but make it look intentionally rough instead of like you were in a hurry to get it done. Still, nice.

Seconding what Weaver said above: the red handprint on the black/grey one is a nice superposition of images, just displaced enough to give an impression of shakiness or uncertainty, but the borders definitely look rushed. I'd recommend taking a rough brush and just sweeping some black or grey over the scribbles, making it uneven enough to keep the whole rough but smooth enough that it's an actual border creeping into the piece.

I like the idea of the hand, looking at the border maybe you wanted to give the impression of somebody who is in a hurry anyway, like running away hurriedly in fear? If so it's given me that picture and it's worked

The hand is really cool. I like the design, except for the pencil border. I could picture something like this ending up on a bag, mug, or t-shirt. The border kind of ruined it in my opnion. It looks like you just scribbled. I know it might be intentionally done to give it a rushed look, but personally I really don't like it. Nice pic by the way. *likes*

-Crescent

Cool. I like this. Although may I suggest shading in the edges darker and making the red spots a bit rounder and blotchier? That should do the trick. ;3 Really good work.