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Hey guys before I began my report just want to apologize for not submitting anything in a while. I had my Internet turned off for some time and just got it back recently. Knights of Dawn chapter 1 is in the works and I hope to have it out soon. If you haven't read the prologues yet I encourage you to check them out and review. And if you haven't read my previous reports you should check them out you might find one interesting.


Change. Its inevitable. Its consuming. Its one of the only sure things in this world for better or worse. Some choose not accept it while others embrace it. Rather its maturely or psychotically everyone changes. Some lose friends while others gain them. It can leave both a negative and positive effect on you depending how you look at it and who is looking. Some are blinded by its promises while others win elections. How best to approach change it is usually uncertain. Some lose fathers while others lose daughters and sons. In many cases change is frightening, and the feeling of uncertainly leaves so many uneasy and distraught. However change can bring light to the darkness. Some can gain back their fathers while fathers can gain back they're children's love. One can be cured of their convictions and sins by a gentle whisper of understanding. Some run away and try to avoid change while others feet become too tired and look back to see that what they were running from was not their enemy but ally. One could find God and be changed forever.

Yet the more things change the more they stay the same.
Last edited by Way2Dawn on Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:35 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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This is great work! Really enjoyed reading it! There was only one thing I didn't quite understand- In most cases changes is frightening the feeling of uncertainly leaves so many uneasy and distraught. I suggest you look over this sentence.

Love this- Some run away and try to avoid change while others feet become too tired and look back to see that what they were running from was not their enemy but ally.

It's very poetical, love you're style :)
Another convicted serial killer is reported to have found God. Which may be great for the serial killer, but we’ve yet to hear what God thinks about it




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Again, you never let me down with your work! This really appeals to me because it really speaks of what I believe and think day to day. Don't you ever stop writing these reports no matter what people say! you have an amazing talent!
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