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I hope you enjoy the Prologue of my newest possible work. I know some of you might
consider this an info dump(cause it is?) but aren't most Prologue's! :]. I find it interesting enough to not bore or feel like an info dump(probably cause I wrote it)
so I guess it's up to you guys to know for sure...
Chapter 1 is coming very soon, I'm writing it right now.
"Long ago in a time of war, the gods were fighting over dominion of a planet called Reins. Reins was created by the first god Orleos over 1500* years before the war began. This planet resting at the center of gravity was home to no one. It was a manifestation of Orleos's power. He left it behind when he departed from the universe, leaving anyone to claim it.
So the war began. All the god's wanted Orleos's infinite power and wisdom for their own. Each possessing a different motive, some good but most evil. In the final battles of the War of Gods, the seven remaining gods made homes on the planet and each held their own area of it. The war ended in a final fierce battle between all of the gods in a single point at Reins north pole.
Ronis, Cleof, Medria, Zilos, Situs, Lemora, and Iliya attacked with all their might, their powers meeting at one time. The result of this was catastrophic. Each god was cast of the planet in a mighty explosion. Reins began to fall apart, separating into thousands of pieces, each glowing with an intense light. Suddenly they shot off into the distance in many different directions, disappearing into the vast space.
Where we live now is what remains of what was once the great holy planet of Reins. The seven gods watch over us from a distance, vowing to return one day to reclaim the power that Orleos left for them. They created us, in the image of Orleos and allow us to live on the mighty planet that he created.
The Specials were a species created by the remains of Reins. When the planet fell apart and those tiny particles of light speed off into the dark emptiness of space, the gods found them and brought them back to the what was left of Reins. They tried to bring them all back, hoping it would restore itself. When it didn't, they found that they could embed the light into a host who could carry it with him or her.
Thus, we were created. The gods made the humans and let them live on what was left of Reins, reproduce and allow them to create enough host that were capable of holding the power of Reins. They knew that not every human created, those they tried to form on their own, couldn't wield the power. So now, whenever a new child is born we must present them to the god of the parents choosing, and see if they can obtain the light. Given a power beyond their understanding and apart of Reins itself, one day the gods would call upon them to restore the holy planet to it's former glory."
Coming Soon
Chapter 1
Friends, Lovers, Enemies
*Not sure if I should use 1500, or one thousand five hundred years, just because 1500
doesn't look that good, kind of sloppy.
Oh yes, I almost forgot. In the future, i.e Chapter 1, I will along with posting the story here, be giving you a link to download my yWriter story file. This way you can it's many resources to read and review as well as correct, make suggestions from their. I know some people prefer this, and yWriter even has an option to hear the story instead of read it(I have to record me reading it aloud, of course). So I hope you enjoy this awesome edition and use it yourself! yWriter is an amazing writing tool.
