The Way You Look At Me..

I love the touch of your skin...
The sound of your voice
The way you say please..
I don't have a choice.

My smile that you love
The sound of the rain
Your sparkling eyes..
I'd deal with the pain.

The touch of your kiss
Your tight embrace
Your cheeky stare
Your cute little face.

Please take me away
On this lovely path
So I'll be with you
And our love will last

I liked how you kept your poem simple but sweet. But there's just one problem in you poem and it is how you rhyme them. For the first stanza it's a good beginning and so is the second. but the third one, you only rhymed the last three lines. Also with the last stanza. but the ending's nice.

Keep up the good work!!

This is okay, but really cliche.
I think you could improve it a lot more by changing some parts around, making it into your own words instead of those phrases that you always hear everyone say.
Of course, I get it that you probably wrote this about someone you know, and it's supposed to be describing them.

So I'll be with you
Our love will last

And this part is incomplete, but all you need to do is add an "And" before "our love will last"