Bored Princess

So... I discovered yesterday that you can post artwork on here!

Therefore, I'll be adding the entirety of my sketchbook through the next few weeks. =]

This is the first page [sorry bout pic quality!]
Hope you like it!!

Hi there, Kidashka! I have to say, this is pretty cool. I always loved pencil drawings, and this one is no exception. The way her arm drapes across her lap is very realistic. Her facial expression is actually bored! It's so cool! Also, you are very good at drawing faces, I predict, because her's is memorable.

I only have one nitpick: it's a little odd for me that she's staring right at me; I would have preferred it if she had something else to focus on (really, anything!). But that's it! Otherwise, it was great, and I look forward to seeing more from you!

-Knightley

If you have any questions or would like another review, please feel free to ask me!

Ooh, very pretty indeed! Her facial expression is fantastic. And the dress is very well drawn. I kind of wish that the fist that she is leaning on had more detail though-it just looks like a circle. I love the desk she is next to, it has a lot of dimension. Over all, good job! I would like to see more.

Ok, just like the others I like this but it could use a good review.

First of all where the arm conects on the left side, it is to dark and doesn't look like it is connected right. I think if you drew it in a little it would look better.'

Second, the arm that is drapped across her lap should have a little bend in the middle, it looks a little stiff.

Thirdly, where her hand hits her face there should be a little line showing the pressure that her face is actually resting on the fist.

Ok, enough with the numbers haha. Ok, next I think that you need to darken the lines on the sketch to make it more visible. I think it would give it a nice touch.

I also think that you should also give more detail in the mirror, it seems that you rushed it a little.

One thing that i really like is the dress and how it flowed, and the lines made it real. I like the detail of the cabinet thing and I like all of the things on it and around it.

Anyway this is almost a 1000 characters so i think it is time to quit haha.

My name is Flower by the way if you didn't know already. I hope I helped.

Keep Drawing

-Flower-

Hey kidashka, this is lovely.
Pros:
-Nice pose, you did very well with it.
-Nice job with face, hair, and expression. Simple yet nice.
-I love the reflection of the back of her head in the mirror!
-Great job with the skirt shape; haha, I love its...its... poofiness.
-I like the background, I guess this is her dressing room or something like it? The accessories sitting behind her add a nice touch.

Cons:
-The shape of her arms are very strange. They look flimsy. And where are her elbows, may I ask? The joint should be very visible. To get these little things right, you often have to try and examine the pose yourself.
-The starting point of her arms are a little bit too thick.
-Her arms are too long. Pretend that she's standing up, and her arms are straight and by her side. They are too long, yes?
-Fingers. Her fingers don't seem to rest in a natural position. They look as if they're glued together.

Overall:
As I said, lovely! She reminds me of a slightly more realistic Princess Peach, if you know what I mean. And as you've seen, the main correction is work on the arms, arms, arms! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your sketchbook. Hope I helped. Keep up the nice work-

KD

Mostly everyone focused on her, but I wanted to draw your attention to the wall behind her. The bookshelf/cabinet holding pot is tilting to the left, so I would think that the mirror and lights need to tilt that way as well. Right now it looks like this /\

you want the mirrors just a bit angled to the left so it is either like this |\ or a bit more like this \\

It would also fit better with the desk if you did this.

~Day

beautiful picture. I liked the background the most.

Wow! I like to draw figures but I mean wow! You are good!
I like these parts the most:
Her left arm and hand
Her skirt
The lamps
The desk
Her reflection in the mirror
Her mouth

Great job! I don't have anything bad to say, except that I think it would be awesome if you added some more detail to her face and dress.
PM me if you post anything else. I will critique!