My favorite thing about this piece is the eye on the right, and how you put not only the eye to a slant, but the tear and the eyebrow also. Very cool. I don't care for the flower and the cheekbones much, though. They don't seem to add anything to the piece.
Overall, three tips I can give to you to make this piece better is:
1. Exaggerate the strange features more! For example, making the neck longer or thicker would help. 2. Make darker lines. It would make the piece stronger as a whole. 3. Play with scale! For example, I think making the eye on the left bigger would be very cool, and would make the piece even more interesting.
I totally agree with Kaedee. I love the right eye. It just has so much personality! The main problems I have with this drawings are the same as hers. Though, I think something that would look awesome is if you added more color or more crazy hair. Maybe, like, one peice of hair could hang over the face, I don't know. Nice, keep doodling!
When all you have is nothing, there is alot to go around.
I shall review this. 
