Ok so I got bored and I know this is on lined paper and blurry. My camara is being really stupid and wouldn't let me get a good pic so I know that parts bad. Anyway here you go.
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.
Hey there, Child. So, the blurriness makes me squint. But never mind that. This is quite literally just a doodle--I don't know if I can critique something that was just daydream'd up! Plus, I love doodles. They always express whats inside. Where and why this came from in you, I don't know. o.O However, one look at it reminded me of a commercial I saw for this freaky show called "Taboo". Haha. I'm rambling. Nice doodle. -Mizz
"Chase your dreams, and remember me, speak bravery, Because after all, those wings will take you up so high." -- Owl City, "To the Sky" ✯ ✯ ✯
Haha, it reminded me of my brother and my Texas History teacher mixed! I don't know how, but it did.
Okay. I don't know how to review a doodle, but I'll try.
1) Your camera's blurry, but you already said that so I shant address it here. 2) The nose seems... like opened? Or cut off? Is that meant to be that way? I know it's a doodle, so things can be deformed and be justified without much argumentation but I'm curious. 3) What made you draw this?
Now, I know it isn't much of a review but I did attempt to critique it. I like the 'doodle' and can relate to your spontaneousness of it all. Thanks for posting!
Love, Fixed
The hardest mountain to climb will have the greatest view. Everything at a different angle: memories serve as double vision, a view from the valleys as well as the precipice. But everything that goes up must come down.The descent from the peak will be twice as graceful & three times as difficult
Haha thanks for the replies. I know its hard to critique a doodle. To: i can be fixed, I have no idea what I was doing with the nose haha it is upside down though so thats why it looks weird. I don't exactly know why I drew it, I was thinking about a class that I was in where we were told to draw stuff with the sideways eyes and such and such and I was really bad at it. So I figured that I would try again I guess. If I made it bigger and more colorful and such it might look better.
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.
It reminded me of a pirate and something from zelda. Don't ask why I thought of Zelda because I dont know either. Doodles are hard to critique like you said because they weren't made to be lifelike or compared to something. They are just there for people to give their opinion on.
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