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I'm in a sudden... parinoid skitzofranic mode... so... yeah... : these are what tears cause, nothing good ever comes out of them: -Me


It’s the looming scent of hand-lotion
That stimulates me for today.
But by tomorrow it’ll be gone again
Until I get to hug you

You owe me an all-day shopping spree
Because you prodded me in the chest until I agreed
To get my “bushy” eyebrows waxed.
I just hope it doesn’t hurt as much as your friend claimed

It was when I was at the hospital, half aware to life
I cried for you like when I was lost. And I was lost.
And you took the time to stay four nights with me in a row
For once not caring how much the gas prices were

I can never beat myself up enough for not saying enough
Now I fear you are slipping farther away
Leaving me alone to take care of your unfinished business
But if I am to be knee-high in your legacy I will not continue it
You have to do it
I would sooner die before you then watch you fade away
Last edited by Elizabeth on Mon Dec 05, 2005 6:53 pm, edited 2 times in total.




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hmm...
not bad...

The second stanza seems to be out of place here...
* spell out the word four

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Done, and done. (It has been done but... yeah)
Thank you.




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Well I liked it, nice and simple..
Yup..not much else i can really say about it except that its good! I feel rather drained tonight..
"Sometimes we see a cloud that's dragonish,
A vapour sometimes like a bear or lion,
A towered citadel, a pendant rock,
A forked mountain, or blue promontory,
With trees upon't that nod unto the world,And mock our eyes with air.."




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Not invisable... invisible.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

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Any... helpful input other than the fact I can't spul wurth my lyfe?
Hee hee....




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its interesting, lol. nice work.
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Thank you man...
I think I wrote this about my mom...



Some call me a legacy, others call me a hero. But I assure you, dear admirers, I am only human.
— Persistence