Neytiri and Jake Sulley

Yep, i told you i got more, here's more!



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I think there's something weird with jake's jaw but please comment, i'd appreciate them.

Hi,
yeah Jake's bottom half looks a little distorted, but i love the girl (blanking on her name right now). These are really good. Oh and i think you might be able to fix the jaw if you move that line thats on it. Its giving his face a shadow
I like!

The name of the girl is neytiri, hence the name of this thread. And yeah i thought that line was making his bottom half face look weird but its a stripe, i'll rub it out. :p

Yes, the jaw does look a little mishapen, but other than that this is very good!

Also, it might be just me but Jake's eyes look a little...I dunno, blank-look-into-the-distance. I don't know how you would change that, but that's my only suggestion.

Keep up the excellent work mate!

It is a really good drawing! As you and others stated the jaw of Jake is a bit messed up, but it's not horrible. Although the focus is the two of them I cant help but look at the background that fits the scene very well. The leaves and trees are drawn very well.

~Day

Hey, no fair! That's better than I could EVER do! I can't draw faces AT ALL!

Okay, I agree with everyone else, his bottom arm is a little distorted. You could fix that by shading in or whatever you do ...

I think that Neytiri (that's the girl, right?) needs to be more... on him. Like, bring her left arm up to his right arm where it's all distorted, her had kind of resting on his bicep. that would put in more emotion into the picture and give it that connection it's missing.

Love,
Fixed

i was trying to copy this picture-

Ok, firstly, this is really good!!! <3



But there are a few things that I think need to be changed:-

Firstly, his jaw... there's been some discussion over it so far but I think what really needs it that it gets shortened - Jake has a pretty round face and you've drawn it quite long.
[However, this will make his neck look longer, so you'll have to lower his head and it wil be a lot of hassle. It might not be worth it for just a small nit-picky detail ]

And someone said earlier he looks a little blank - I don't particularly agree with this but if you wanted to make him look more intense, lower his eyebrows a bit to make him look more squinty. =]

Second, her neck - i like how you've done her leaning really close, but her neck is swelling slightly. If she's leaning, she'll be stretching her neck so it needs to be tauter and more elegant.
Also, the shading on her nose could be a tad fainter? That's not really a big issue though.
Oh, and last of my nit-picking rampage - I think the arrow should be straighter cause it's a bit bendy.
That's all =]

Green is stuff I LOVE:
His arm looks really muscular and tense and generally awesome! *squeal*
And I love how you did their hair - particularly the pretty details on the ends! It must have taken alot of patience but it was worth it <3
Also the patterns on their skin.... That's what has put me most of drawing Avatar fanart cause I don't have the patience, but you've done it amazingly! It gives them a 3D feel as you haven't just drawn the stripes on flatly. WOW.

Well done, and keep drawing! Can't wait to see more of your work! =]

I haven't got much to critique (after the comment above) but I can quite truly say that I love it! You've done the faces and musculature very well, something that I don't do in my own drawings. I have but one nitpick, and it's partly the movie's fault.
It may be because of the fact that their heads are tilted, but to me it just looks like they aren't looking at the same thing. Assuming that they're hitting a target, I would expect both of them to be looking in the same direction. In a way, it does, but still, their eyes seem to be slightly...askew. At least, from my point of view.
XD
Sorry if that didn't make any sense.
Jenth.

These are amazing!
But I think on the 1st picture, I think Jake's neck and jaw are a bit off, as well as Neytiri's nose.
Second picture; Jake's jaw again

I think that's it you're an amazing artist, this is really fantastic
I would kive to see this in color, if you ever decide to do that

@Shishu: I believe it is the same picture normal then the others are zoomed in on areas so we can more clearly se them.

I've edited bits of it, not major edits, but i've changed Jake's jaw and you might see other changes as well.



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It looks a lot better in real life but... anyway... not major improvements.