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Jenthura wrote:I'm surprised nobody noticed the metal reflection of the brush.

Lulz. When I read this, I had to go back and check. I didn't notice at first because it was so good. It was just so subtle and natural that my eye didn't even register it because it expected a reflection like that. Sweet.

I really liked both of the building ones. As lava says, I like them both equally. Each has a separate reaction in me.

No idea who Pon is, but I am in awe of your bone-drawing skills. My only critique: it seems like his outline!chin is too long to have been supported by his bone!chin. But seriously, your pelvis-drawing-skillz are epic.

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Really really really nice! I dare say but it's better than some professional illustrators I have seen. Atleast I think so, looks really neat and nice and is made to come alive by adding small details just like real life.




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Wow, Jenthura! You have some serious talent.

First one: Just awesome. You've managed to add so much detail without making it seem scribbly from using just black.

Second one: Definitely better than the first. I like it without the skyscraper in the back. However, it looks a little empty. It needs...something. I'm not quite sure what, but there's a missing link.

Third one: Now that you mention it, I can see the metallic reflection on the brush. It made the whole picture. :P

Fourth one: I don't know who Pon is, but now I'm definitely curious. I love it. :D

Overall, I think you could get published. As in, RIGHT NOW. These are very newspaper-worthy, I have to say. Keep up the awesome work, Jenthura!

Also, If you wouldn't mind PMing me when you post more of your art, I would love to review!

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Wow. That's amazing. You're very talented. You could definitely be a cartoonist with skyscrapers like that. Excellent drawings, man. Post some more up soon!

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~These pictures are amazing! One thing I have never been able to do is draw. My favorite would have to be the skeleton, and I think the skyscraper makes the first picture more complete. Keep up the good work!
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Man, you have some talent. What i love about your drawings is that there really clear but have a goood amount of detail. something that annoys me is that a lot of people who draw in your kinda style is that they don't know when to stop and they end up bogging their work down with an excess of superfluous details. You don't make that mistake and that shows that your style is quite mature. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks so much for all the comments everyone! I don't think I'll ever manage to remember PM'ing everybody when I post the next drawing thread, but I'll surely try! :D
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These are freaking amazing! Probably the best drawings of non-people I have ever seen around YWS. Although I haven't been around long. The buildings are thing that captured me. They're truly marvelous and interesting. The skeleton made me laugh, but it is nicely drawn as well.
The paintbrush is cool to because it seems like the brush is running out of paint.

Amazing definitely PM when you post something new! I bookmarked your profile as well.

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I like the one with the building in the back better than without it. My favorite though is the pen and the red ink or blood or whatever it is. I was like o my gosh that is so amazing haha.

Keep Writing my friend.

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I love your drawings! The ones of the city are cool, very detailed. I like the sushi sign too. :)
For the paintbrush, my god. Its perfect, just perfect. There is nothing else to say.
The pon one is weird. I think its cute, but I dont really like it.

Heres what I want to say. In your building drawings, you only use cross hatching as your detail. Maybe you should try stippling. I think it would look amazing on your buildings windows maybe? Or the sushi sign? I dont know. Look up stippling and tell me what you think.
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My gosh, Jen! I love these! There's nothing more to say! They are all just so completely wonderful, I have no nitpicks. Which is rather surprising for me...
My favorite has to be the one of the brush. It's so perfect, to me, but they all are wonderful! I could see these being published. The buildings, for some reason, made me think of Curious George. Maybe I've gone insane. Probably.
But, tsk, tsk! I love them. That's the point.
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