My heart in your hands.

Wow, I really liked your poem! Like other people have said, it's not the best. It could be improved by spending time on unique ways in telling your emotions.

Poetry is supposed to be raw.

I agree with sealegs, but I on the other hand think this was a little good raw. It was just a different kind of good raw. You could have made it a bit more raw and a little less different, but I like the essence of it right now. The flow and rhythm was remarkable. I definitely think you have a knack at writing poetry. I do wish that you will continue developing your talent and popping out better and even more remarkable poems than this one, so that I will get the chance to read it. (:

Much love and best wishes,
Morgan(:

I really like the imagery this creats, but also how vague it is. I guess you had a specific message in mid when you wrote it, but it could mean a lot of different things depending on who reads it, which makes it more relatable. Reading at frist I got one message, then looking at it more personally, I got another. It definitely gets an emotional response. Oerall I thought it was really good. =D

I loved this poem!
Its really sweet, yet kinda sinister... in a way o.o
I enjoyed reading it and although i dont know the hidden meaning, i can see that it has depth

The only thing i would say,
is maybe keep the flow of rhyming (or no ryhming) all the way through,
but thats just me,

if im honest, im more of a story person than a poetry person,
and i loved this very muchly indeed xD

keep on writingg
-Ava