Salty

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I am addicted to you, Salty
Every time you leave me
First,
with a grain of salt melting on my tongue
Next,
sparkling in my hair
Finally,
you scatter all about me,
Diamonds burning in the sun
I see in your reflection.

I press against your pebbly skin
Waiting to be flooded over again
Come again wave,
I am not afraid
And similar to horse,
I find my minerals in you
You still persist,
You come back in every tear
Prickling, healing, kissing, killing
Every skin cell.
I am addicted to you, Salty.

note* to clarify the line about the horse, I know that since horses cannot get salts from their regular food, they have to lick salt separately to get all the necessary minerals.
Sometimes you have to dance on bones (past experience) just to have the strength to keep going.




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well writin.. very well done.. i love it..

keep writing
keep up the good work
"Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish." ~John Jakes




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:) Your poem made me smile. Salty is awesome.
Please take care to use good grammar when making a post!

"grammer" 1519 matches on YWS *twitches*

Rydia is the ruler of the world. :(



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