This isnt me (I know me)

O Hai Thar.

First off, you should review other people’s works before submitting any of your own. Second, even if you wrote something very quickly, it’s only polite to read through it before posting and correct any mistakes. As there is no punctuation here, it makes it difficult to read and understand.

Like here:

summer time never seemed so cold
without you by my side
i realize i only live to know
who i am is just the fate of time

Which part goes with which? Is it,

Summer time never seemed so cold.
Without you by my side,
I realise I only live to know who I am is just the fate of time?

Or,

Summer time never seemed so cold without you by my side.
I realise I only live to know who I am is just the fate of time, and still the second and last lines don’t make sense.

Add punctuation so I can understand it better, and I’ll come back and review it properly.

-twit

First off, I don't know why it does not show it but I have reviewed other peoples work.

Possibly it's because your reviews weren't long or detailed enough. You have to write a certain number of characters before a post is counted as a review.

Second off, I simply needed a quick opinion on a song before a performance. Not a lecture or some rude reply that did not help.

I'm sorry that you took my attempt at constructive critiscm as a rude lecture. In my quick opinion, you need punctuation. If you were singing it to me, you wouldn't, but you are, and for things to make sense written down, you generally need some kind of punctuation. Otherwise, it's very difficult to make sense of what you're trying to say, and so I cannot give you a decent critique.