Lost?

Burning cold,
Biting frost,
The sky is falling;
I am lost.

A simple poem, it came to me as I was trudging through the snow and cold today...

Simple, and yet really good. Good rhyming and use of oxymoron in the first line. I like.

Thank you! And this from 'The People's Poet' raises my morale!

hm....nice nice...really good

Nice!!! It was verry good and expressive, even though its only four lines!!!

Its really good, a simple poem. sticks in the mind. Love it!

It reminds me of the 5000000000000 times that my sister and I got lost.

Sister: Wait... where are we?

Me: Who cares? WHEEE!!! Goes sliding down the sand dunes.

Sister: Um... there's a little problem with that... there's like this crab or something at the bottom...

Me: AHHHH!

Yeah. So awesome.

I like it! Very short, but sweet and discriptive. Awesome flow.

I hope you aren't all saying this because everyone else is... I prefer the truth. Otherwise, if these praises are in fact the true feelings of each individual, I say thank you. And short is good, it stays in your mind.

Hehe paranoid? Sorry. Kidding. I am being honest. That other people like it also is just a sign that its a great poem!

GREAT. so simple, yet so effective. often a few lines will say SO much more than lots of false fancy words... i admire your ability to keep it so simple and not go overboard like i always do. it also just sounds awesome. i like how you added the question mark to the title, it makes it much more interesting and intriguing.

just one little thing: this is not a critisism, just something that came to mind when i read it... the " sky is falling" part made me thik of that annoying kids book, chicken little, THE SKY IS FALLING!!

but this rocks. and i am being honest. if i though it could use some work, id let you know in a nice way.

A memorable poem. It was good

Why does the title have a question mark on the end? I don't think it needs one..

Nope, don't understand why it's there.

Purdy. Me like it a lot...its cute

Yes, well the question mark is there bcause I wasn't sure 'Lost' was a good title. Hehehe...
(Thank yea all again, is there no other criticism?!)