Photo Exhibition [2]

I'm here again so soon but I love sharing my pictures so much ^^ (photo heavy)

These are from today:

Street Shadow



Long dead, long forgotten



Red Skies



Spider Berries



Java Lights



From a Squirrel's view




And my favourite from Greece:

Crumbling Fortress



White wash in Corfu



The Clocktower



The Fall of Achilles

I always love your pictures.

The first one is a bit boring, at least to me. It's all gray and white! I would add some color to it maybe, like a fall leaf or something, you know? We need something else in the picture to look at other than the shadow.

The second one fascinates me. I don't know why, it's just so cool looking. The leaves are a beautiful color, and the blur is perfect.

The third and fourth ones I feel like I've seen before. Have you taken pictures of this tree before? Or maybe someone else has pictures like these. I don't know, for some reason they don't really capture my attention. No pun intended.

The fifth one just... it's just great. I love the color. So original, and not the normal color you seem to get out of coffee beans. I love how you can see the texture of the beans, and the cracks in their shells. Just a great picture. I can totally see this on a coffee add.

The sixth one... I don't know I just find it a bit awkward. Your blur is in the beginning of the picture, and that seems a bit unusual to me. I just don't see the beauty in it.

And the last one is beautiful. It's just perfectly centered, without any weird angles or anything. It really allows you to look at the art within the art. I can see the shine in the picture that you could probably see on the statue in person.

Great photographer, keep doing it!

Classy

Hi Kammie!

Nice set of pictures! Let me get reviewing.

#1. Honestly, I don't like it. For one, it's an over-used idea. It maybe a good 'for-the-memories' photo but otherwise, it doesn't show skill as a photographer, unless you go madly creative with it and surprise me. Sorry, if I'm harsh.

#2.Very very good. Color isn't overdone and I like the blur. No complaint.

#3 (and #4.) They're good, but I would suggest maybe zooming in and focusing on a few berries maybe focus on the tree trunk with a blurred berry foreground. (I do think the second option's worth trying.)

#5.This is really good! Well, my only nitpick is you could let a bit of the brown of the seeds show.
The upper orange transparent thingy: The left end of it gets a little too opaque. Reduce it a bit to maintain a gradient-like transparency. (I'm assuming the orange things are edited stuff.)

#6.I love this.

You've been to Greece? Wow!

Whitewash: I want to really go wow, but something nags me. I'm not sure of it.It's good but maybe you shoould've focused only on the building on the left.

Achilles: I really like this one.

Anyway, keep up the good work!
~Lava

I think your photos are great except the form the squirrels point of view one.I love your photos of Greece and I am jealous you got to go there. What type of camera did you use for these? Anyway,keep writing and posting your photos Fiction.

The first one is a bit boring, at least to me. It's all gray and white! I would add some color to it maybe, like a fall leaf or something, you know? We need something else in the picture to look at other than the shadow.

I don't think it's boring at all. In fact I find this street shadow the best among all.
My gosh!!!! How can one have so much talent. Kamas you got to be kidding me. Are you sure you're 14? It just looked professional. Amazing !!!!! No flaws I guess.