An essay on the history of ideas-Aristotle and Plato

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Both Aristotle and Plato have taken an utopist totalitarian society as a foundation-stone in their political discourse. However, there are some major differences as well as some similarities in the political ideologies of the two Greek philosophers’ ant it is these, which I will analyze in this paper.
Justice is the main pursuit of Plato’s political ideology but in its pursuit, Plato rejects rhetoric, quite contrary to the sophists. He believes that justice is good in itself and so are its consequences. On the other hand, the fundamental argument of Aristotle centers on the point that nature does nothing in vain. To him, politics is considered to be the end-product of a virtuous life. He is more concerned about the logic of happenings rather than their metaphysical existence, a substantial difference in Plato’s political ideology.
Plato argues that justice is a kind of division of labor. A carpenter should be concerned only about his wooden planks, a builder of his bricks and so on. He puts the notion forward that if such division of labor does exist in society, it would make it a just one. He puts it clearly that “when the trader, the auxiliary and the guardian each do their own business that is justice, and will make the city just.”(Plato, Republic) Aristotle, on the other hand argues that polis is prior to the individual and away form polis, we are not humans. He argues that “the state is by nature clearly prior to the family and to the individual, since the whole is of necessity prior to the part.”(Aristotle, Politics, Book One) To put it more aptly, Aristotle makes it very clear that a human is not a human if he is not a part of the state. He believes in collectivism, not the individual specialization vis-à-vis division of labor that Plato proposes.
To Plato, justice, happiness and harmonization are all equivalent. In one of the dialogues, he argues that justice is there when various parts of the individual harmonize within himself. Thus, for Plato, the ideal state is the one in which all groups harmonize within themselves. Aristotle believes that “justice is the bond of men instates, for the administration of justice, which is the determination of what is just, is the principle of order in political society.”(Aristotle, Politics, Book One) Aristotle is in more favor of a society based on inequality and hierarchal structure. He firmly believes that only rich should be the rulers since they are masters of the land.
The value system of Plato is based on the fact that the higher the being is, the better it is. Aristotle, meanwhile, believes that the whole is better than the part and gives a biological argument to corroborate his thesis. He mentions the example of a human hand and says that if the hand is not attached to the body, it is of no use. It is only useful when it is part of a human body. For Plato, the argument is somewhat different because he believes the closer you are to the true form, the more you are.
Now, let us turn our attention to the kind of government the two propose.
Plato believes that we have three main faculties, that of appetite being the lowest, emotions being in the middle and reason being the highest. The appetite is matched with the producing class, emotions with the Guardians and reason with the philosophers. Furthermore, the producing class has the virtue of temperance, the guardians of courage and the philosophers of knowledge. When the above three segments work properly, the state is just, superior and blissful.
Aristotle, being in favor of inequality and a firm hierarchal structure, proposes that only some have the aptitude to rule and not all. For him, monarchy is of four types; spartan, tyrannical, dictatorship and kingly. He favors the last one because he believes that “the best must be that which is administered by the best, and in which there is one man, or a whole family, or many persons, excelling all the others together in virtue, and both rulers and subjects are fitted, the one to rule, the other to be ruled, in such a manner as to attain the most eligible life.”(Aristotle, Politics, Book Three)
For Plato, the virtue of the philosopher is that of the ruling class. Since he is a man of reason, he is to govern over the people. He argues that the “only life which looks down upon the life of political ambition is of true philosophy.” Aristotle, by contrast, is more giving in a sense that he proposes that aristocracy should allow someone form the masses to rule if he superior in wisdom, that is, a make of gold.
Now let us turn to the realm of ideas of the two philosophers. Plato divides the known into two: the world of the relative and the world of the absolutes. He believes that you can get knowledge in a euphonious way. Another way to acquire it would be to have a dialectical method. According to him the universe is divided into two forms: realm of ideas which gives birth to knowledge and realm of appearances which give birth to opinion. He states blatantly that “those who love the truth in each thing are to be called lovers of wisdom and not lovers of opinion.”(Plato, Republic)
Theology is the branch that Aristotle explores and his belief is that everything is created for a purpose. He believes that of all the parts of existence, the end is superior and the best. “In all arts and sciences the end is a good and the greatest good and in the highest degree a good in the most authoritative of all-this is the political science.” (Aristotle, Politics, Book Three)
In the last part, I will analyze some of the contradictions I found in the political philosophy of the two philosophers. Plato, although highly in favor of upward mobility of the masses, excludes slaves from the hierarchy. Also, he makes it clear that the guardians should be highly influential people and not from the lower bounds of society. Also, women for Plato are nothing but anathema since they are not to take part in the politics of the state and neither in its functioning. Only men are to form the different institutions of the state because a child is thought to be still in a process of learning while a woman is simply incapable. Aristotle also continues in this vein and believes that women and slaves are not to be part of functioning of the state, the former being virtue less and the latter thought only to obey, not to command.
Also, indirectly in the case of Plato and directly in the case of Aristotle, an idea of a totalitarian state is proposed with the state monitoring every part of its citizens life from matters relating from marriage to religion. History bears witness to the face that such totalitarian societies are highly centralized, as in the case of the Peruvian Incas and Mexican Aztecs where the ruler was the nucleus of the state and administration. This extensive social organization around one focal point was the eventual cause of their demise since when the ruler falls, the domino-effect comes into place and one by one, the whole state collapses.
These are some of the contradictions that I found in the political philosophy of the two. However, there is no doubt that Plato and Aristotle have contributed mush to political thought and most of the modern discourses have their findings as their basis.
But since nothing is perfect in the real world, where things are in permanent state of flux, a process of continuous knowledge still continues.




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However, there are some major differences as well as some similarities in the political ideologies of the two Greek philosophers’ ant it is these, which I will analyze in this paper.

The ‘ant’ should be ‘and.’ So what I’ve learned from writing essays is that you are not supposed to come right out and say ‘I will analyze this’ or ‘I will be talking about this.’ For one, we already know you will analyze this because it seems to be your thesis. For two, why would you be writing and essay of not to analyze this. What I’m saying is that you stating that you will do something is not necessary in an essay. Just show us, don’t tell us.

Your second paragraph, in my opinion, needs more examples. For someone who doesn’t know about these two philosophers at all, I was confused a bit by this paragraph. Give some modern day examples, or some of the things the two people did that would further help explain their ideas.

Plato believes that we have three main faculties,

I have learned through my teachers that you should refrain from using words like ‘we, me, I, you,’ and basically talk like you are not speaking to anyone. I would replace ‘we’ with ‘humans.’

In the last part, I will analyze some of the contradictions I found in the political philosophy of the two philosophers.

Again with the analyze. Instead of saying you will do something, just say ‘here are the contradictions I found in the political…’ or something like that.

Aristotle also continues in this vein and believes that women and slaves are not to be part of functioning of the state, the former being virtue less and the latter thought only to obey, not to command.

So this quote and the quote above totally contradict themselves. In the quote above, you say you will analyze the contradictions, in this quote, you are saying something they have in common. If you’re going to point out when you are talking about their contradictions, then you need to point out when you talk of their similarities, too. Mostly just to not confuse your readers.

Only one more thing. Organization. This essay is all over the place, and there are many small paragraphs that can be easily combined with others. I would suggest forming your essay in a more organized way.

First your opening paragraph, tell what you will be talking about, and maybe explain some background of Plato and Aristotle. Tell us where they live, when they lived, and who, or what, they are associated with that we may have already heard of. Just so we can get a sense of the two people and how maybe the things happening in their time period may have influenced their views.

For your second paragraph, I would only talk about Pluto’s views on justice.
Third, Aristotle's views.

Fourth, how they contradict and how they are similar.

fifth, the value system of Plato. Be sure to explain more of what it is.

Sixth the value system of Aristotle.

and so on and so on. You get the idea. First talk about one of them, then talk about the other, and finally talk about the similarities and differences. That way you will not be jumping around so much, and it will be less confusing.

I really liked this. I feel like I know more about them. The only thing I suggest is that you bring this essay more to life. You can do this, or seem to do this, my adding specific examples of what these two people did. I mean, they didn’t just walk around saying their ideas but not acting on them, did they? If they did, then you should say that in your essay. If not, uncover some things that they did to support their beliefs.

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