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Here are two anime drawings... i think they are, but i know they're manga.

Ashitaka (princess mononoke) his right eye is a bit big ha ha.


and Haku (Spirited away)


The only two anime films i've seen ha ha. comments would be helpful.

I'm not the one to judge anime, mostly because I never drew it before, but I think it's fine. It's their hair that throws me off. The girl's hair in the second pic is off where it's blowing away from her face. It looks like its coming from the back of her head instead of the side, unless that's what you meant to do. The guys hair on the first pic just doesn't seem to frame him well. But I shouldn't judge because I couldn't draw something like that. X3 But other then that, I think it's fine. Good job, keep it up!

Hey iCarlyfan, I've seen both movies also! I think you did perfectly on the first one (Ashitaka). Great job! The second one (Haku) was very simple, but nice. You could easily recognize both characters. Sorry...don't have any critiques for you!
...but I guess that's a good thing in a way too, right?

~KD

ok thanks! i know i love those films.

Re: Anime
by Quetseli » Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:31 pm

I'm not the one to judge anime, mostly because I never drew it before, but I think it's fine. It's their hair that throws me off. The girl's hair in the second pic is off where it's blowing away from her face. It looks like its coming from the back of her head instead of the side, unless that's what you meant to do. The guys hair on the first pic just doesn't seem to frame him well. But I shouldn't judge because I couldn't draw something like that. X3 But other then that, I think it's fine. Good job, keep it up!

these are how they're meant to look-


and

Oh by the way, you missed the red markish things on the girl's cheeks in the second drawing, but you probably just forgot.

I did and i didnt, i was going to colour it and do the cheeks, but i decided not to ha ha.