Hmm. Interesting picture. I'm not sure exactly what it's supposed to be or depict, which makes it a little hard to critique completely. But, all in all, I do like it. It's different, which makes is mean more than your average, everyday pictures that everyone seems to take.
"Neglect not the gift that is in thee, which was given thee by prophecy, with the laying on of the hands of the presbytery." Timothy 4:14 KJV
Well, as Ayumi said, it's interesting but I'm unsure of it. Though it's different and nice, I'm not sure I like it.
I'm not sure what your main focus is on, but I do think it shouldn't be the black object( a camera?) I guess it would look nice if you focused on the eyelashes and her hand. Also, the lighting is off. It seems as if an open window cast light on her palm.
Keep it up! Cheers, ~Lava
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'Ello there, Maria. I'm Mizz, and it's nice to meet you. Quite interesting, but in truth I don't know what to make of this. A lady holding a camera? That's my guess. I would like it without the camera, just focusing on her eyelashes--it would look so contemplative, so divine. A picture perfect. The eyelashes do need more focus, however, even in this picture. Nice work. Tata! -Mizz
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Hmm, this is a very nice picture. It's abstract and definitely something else; what is that your holding? You've shot this at a nice angle, and I like how only the tips of your eyelashes are showing. One complaint is that this picture is too blurry. There are a few online sites that will help you sharpen your images. Over all, this was a nice, unique photo.
-Elinor
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
True, true :] There has to be a main focus here. I think around the face, it's too blurry. It's quite interesting and stranger than others which makes it mysterious. It's good but even your title doesn't give a clue out.
Errm, I don't want to sound mean, Hope I didn't! :] You did a nice job, ^.6 Just bringing out the focus point helps.
~Skyy.
Come sail the stars with me Through the sky not through the sea Come sail the stars with me Take me hand and make believe Come sail the stars with me Through the sky not through the sea Come sail the stars with me Take me hand and make believe~JT Lloyd
Hmm... this is definitely missing a focus. If it was me, I'd put focus on the eyelid and eyelashes, maybe putting a light blue on the eyelid so it contrasts well with the blue on the glass on the camera. And maybe brighten up the background? -Maddy
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