Hey I drew this a little while ago off of a life model. It's pretty much finished, but if anyone can find anything else on it that can be worked on, I'd really appreciate some critique. Thanks!
Hey, Lena! I remember you showing us this in chat one time! My only nitpick is that the neck looks a little too long and the eyes a little to small. Very nice, I love your attention to detail - His hair, his mouth. All I have to say is, go Lena! I'm liking this
Keep drawing - please?
~Durr
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Once again, awesome work! Keep it up! I love the detailing and shading. Ahhhh, it's difficult to nitpick it; but anyway, here goes:
1.The right eyes has a slight feminine touch as opposed to the left, if you get my drift. I think it can be improved by reducing the amount of iris you've drawn by a teeny bit. 2.The texture of the cap could be improved on. I'm no good at texture detailing but I think you could reduce a little scratching on the cap and give it a soft look.
I hope I helped. Cheers. ~Lava
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Hi there! So, I like this. You did a really good job with the shading, especially on the cheek and around his eyes. Your lines are also done well; not too straight and not too curved. Beautiful detailing, but I do agree with Lava that the cap looks a little scratchy. Some of your proportions are off though. The ear is a bit big, and his chin is too small. This guy has really strong features, and then his chin is just sort of... there. If that makes sense? The neck is a bit long and thick, and the forehead slants a little too much.
Fantastic job! *cicks the like button*
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As for the neck, big ear, little chin, eyes... That's what the guy actually looks like. I'm not going to change the porportions and make the guy look prettier than he actually is.
But I see where everyone's coming from. Thanks so much!
Like the others, the neck really bugs me. But, if that's how he looked, then it seems pretty good to me. The bagginess of the shirt bugs me a tad, but otherwise it's quite good.
Awesome job, Lena!
~Arris
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Erm, with life drawing proportions are interesting I guess, because it obviously depends on how odd the person looks or how familiar they look. Now, to me, the neck is absolutely fine. It's got the features needed and is in proportion, despite what's been said. The reason why it looks long is because the shoulder in the bottom right isn't in place, from my eye. I think the direction of his collar bone and shoulder should be facing into the picture more rather than horizantally across. If you know what I'm getting at... The shoulders, what I can see of them, are just a little tweaked in the wrong direction and I'd only really suggest looking over this because the rest of the drawing is perfect. I don't see anything wrong with the eyes. ~keep up the good work Ben
