You're My Everything

This song is dedicated to my best friend.
I've never stopped loving you...


You're My Everything

My jealousy is plain to see
You're standing right in front of me
But I can't be with you cause'...
You're with that other girl
Yeah-- that other girl

[Chorus]
You're the one I want to hold
You're the one I dream about
I tell you all my secrets
You're the one I'd never doubt
To be with you, I'd give anything
Yeah-- it's true...whoa!
You're my every--thing
[end Chorus]

Like a summer night that fades away
It waits to arise a brand new day
You slipped right through my fingers
All I'm asking for is one chance
Won't you give me a second glance?

When you're in trouble,
You come to me
When you're worn and lost,
You come find me
Baby-- why can't you see?

[Chorus]
That you're the one I want to hold
You're the one I dream about
I tell you all my secrets
You're the one I'd never doubt
To be with you, I'd give anything
Whoa-- it's true...yeah--!
You're my every--thing
[end Chorus]

You're my best friend
Whatever it may take
For you, I'd bend
Loving you, I can't fake

You're the one I dream about
You tell me all your secrets
You're the one I can't live without

My jealousy is plain to see
I need you here in front of me
I'd do anything!

Yeah--
Yeah-- [whoa!]
You're my every--thing
Yeah, my everything
My everything

I REALLY like this! You've got definite talent!!! It's so true!!! But is this a girl singing it to a guy? I was wondering.

Wow, this is very good! ^.^ I liked the chorus. you should definitely keep on writing lyrics!!

Hey! I really like the song but it seems a bit choppy in parts. Smooth it up a bit and it'll be perfect. I do love it though. The chorus is so good! I would download it onto my MP3 player for sure. :)

<3 Chrissie

Wow, thank you so much everyone I wrote this at 4 a.m. this morning. I couldn't sleep. I was with my best friend (the guy in this song) till about 2 a.m. The only problem is, his girlfriend was with us too. She's a friend of mine but I've known this guy for 6 years. And yes, I wrote this from my point of view. It's like I'm singing it to him (my best friend).

wow. i'm... speachless. I'm in awe. I'm jealous of ur serious talent. wow

Man! This is wonderful! I can't believe you have such a talent! I could never write lyrics like this! It's perfect just the way it is! I always need an idea to write good lyrics! P.M. me!
Great Work,
Triple Travel Tales
I hope to write lyrics like yours one day! I need comments on my 3rd part of my story in Adventure Fiction. Please comment! I'm trying to promote it! I only got one on it!
GTG!
TTT---again

Thanks to everyone who have replied



TripleTravelTales,

I cannot send you a private message because you've disabled that feature. If you allow it, than I'll surely let you in on some songwriting tips

-thevoiceinside

thevoiceinside wrote:Like a summer night that fades away
It waits to arise a brand new day
You slipped right through my fingers
All I'm asking for is one chance
Won't you give me a second glance?

Loved this verse.

Overall I thought it was really nice and heartfelt and I liked the lyrics. The only problem I had was I couldn't hear the song in my head at all. It had pretty good rhythm and everything but I just couldn't hear it, but if you can, awesome. I imagined it as slowish. Not like grossly slow but definitely melodic. Is that right?
Nice job overall though

-Carly

This is a brilliant piece of work. I just loved it from start to finish. You have so much talent:)

Like a summer night that fades away
It waits to arise a brand new day
You slipped right through my fingers
All I'm asking for is one chance
Won't you give me a second glance?

You're my best friend
Whatever it may take
For you, I'd bend
Loving you, I can't fake

These are my two most favourite verses from the song.

It was so heartfelt, so emotional, personal.
Could you PM me if you write something new? I totaly love your work

Ikafe