Neytiri

Hey there

This was pretty good! Your eyes are absolutely perfect in my opinion. You've drawn the nose very well too. Although, I think that you could add a bit more shading around the edges of the nose. The lips also look slightly out of shape. I know as a fact that they are seriously hard to draw though. Trust me, I would know!

Everyone else has pretty much said all that I want to say, so I won't repeat it all again! Seriously well done.

Keep drawing,

xoxo Skins

ok thanks. i'm doing another neytiri and jake picture. i'll post it here. i can't get her face right though lol. >.< I keep rubbing out. plus she looks like a gorilla ha ha.

Ermm... I'm aware you've already edited this but I really wanted to comment cause it's so pretty >.<



Her eyes are AMAZING.... they look so soulful and intriging.... and the eyelashes... *sigh*

I'm just confused why you changed the light source... not that it makes it look worse - it looks like she is holding something shiny that's reflecting on her face. Makes it look mysterious =]

Only few things are that you drew her eyebrows quite dark, when they're almost invisible on the photo... It's possible that the drawing looked strange without them? *shrug* Not that important anyhow.

If you move her neck slightly to the right I think it will look more natural =]

Her jaw - lots of discussion on this... I suggest you flesh it out slightly as it looks hollow and gives her a slightly unfed appearance.
Now you can examine my fantastic face sketches xD
You have drawn her with quite a long face, but she has a very rounded face, i think. To make her look more feminine you just have to squish her features vertically to make her nose smaller and a more round face. =D [but alot of hassle; this is more of a future note than anything else]

Other than that, this is AWESOME.
*goes back to staring at eyes and eyelashes*

ok ha ha, I know I'm going to edit it a lot. Your review has helped a lot. I know her nose is pretty long, but it gets frustrating when i draw the lips too... I have rubbed out a lot in this picture. But I'm going to edit her again later. Maybe she'll look better when it's finally done. Thank you anyway.

Ok... I've edited my drawing now. Again. The lips are pretty dodgy, but i don't know how to change them.

Something definitely needs changing now.