Birthday poem

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It is a blissful day ma pal, your natal day,
glitter, shimmer, twinkle, all in a ray.

it is the time to be jubilant, make u smile,
where is the atrocious life? it's away a mile.

See the playing clouds, gaze the jaunty air,
come together, ride them , there is no fare.

forget your seethe, feel yourself my sweetie pie,
nothing is grey, all ravish all very high.

my all endearing wishes are here for you,
a very winsome and happy birthday to you!




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Good work you have done. Sarah you carried out the feeling in you. my best wishes everytime with you.

GOod luck

Suraj
My lust for knowledge can do whatever it wants.

Love is life and life is writing.




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Great poem, good use of words and really original. :)
Reading is one form of escape. Running for your life is another. ~Lemony Snicket




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thank u both.its an original poem i wrote it on my friend's birthday.(15 Feb)



That awkward moment when you jump out a window because your friend jumped out a window, then you remember that your other friend can fly.
— Rick Riordan, The Ship of the Dead