My Finale

I'm done




(No this is not spam, it's simply a strong statement that I hope conveys something to you. It is a poem, not something that should be in a social forum. Oh yeah and also I'm done with poetry, it's been fun guys, really. But this is #100 in my personal portfolio, an I just can't go on.)

Strong statements should be that -- strong. But this is so ambiguous and vague that it's hardly such. Without your explanation, it would have meant absolutely nothing to anyone... and even now, I'm wondering what you mean by #100 in your personal portfolio.

I demand another poem which is much prettier than this... a better finale, if you will!

I've written 100 poems. Not all of them are here. I just wanted to convey the power. Hint: ask yourself, why did he say that? Was he giving up because he couldn't write any more? Was he out of words? Did he want to leave with a bang? Stuff like that. I did that with a lot of my poems too.. I hate spoon-feeding the readers but they always require it in the end. I'll still be on the site reviewing and what not

The problem is, I could ask those questions... but more likely than not, the only question I wonder is, "Why should I care?" Don't spoon-feed your readers... but do give them something meaningful to chew on. Just because bones are hard to chew doesn't means that they can satisfy your hunger.

A bigger impact was needed prior to this