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BenFranks wrote:@Vanadis: When Reg escapes the cell holding in the next post, he will stumble across Gracie Finn, is that ok? I don't think they've met before and it could be interesting to work with. My character will be slightly mental at this point.


Yes, Ben! Awesome. Escape is always easier in numbers. Or at least with someone else who can kick some tail. Reg is mental, and Gracie is...well, they separated her from her remaining kid, so she's not exactly a happy camper.
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It is going to be after the gala when she realizes Reg is alive. Here is my revealing of the plan:

Riley is going to pose as Lilly Clide, a woman attending the gala (Lilly has been previously 'taken care of'). She is going to get the Captain (who directed the group of cops that supposedly killed Reg) alone and kill him as revenge. Then she's going to run into Reg on the way back, still in fully party attire. It's going to be pretty funny.
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Could, somehow, we have Reg end up meeting up with Riley while she's still in her party clothes? I think the overall reaction would be funny. It'd be even cooloer if it was dark (so sometime during the night) and he didn't know who she was at first. But it's really up to you, Ben.
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Sounds good, Kay. Reg will probably be with Gracie Finn and James though. (:




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That makes sense. I think James would recognize Riley before Reg did, seen as he hasn't seen her for two months.
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Vanadis, your last post came out of nowhere. I read it twice, and I'm like....wow, this just made Maitea's day.
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Haha. Well, with Maitea being kinda down in the dumps, Ace felt like he should do something about it. :D
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I think Tia and Alis are kind of alike. They're both kind-of evil.....
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Yeah, but Alis is more straightforward. She just takes out a gun she doesn't like, Tia seems more like she would have a full-blown plan.
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Maitea's sister's comment made me laugh hardcore.

*can imagine Ace whining, "I'm not an alien!"*
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I shall be away for the weekend and am not back until monday. Keep me involved in the storybook.




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Have fun Ben...

What would have happened if Ace overheard what Lilly said (Maitea's POV):

"So your marrying a half-gay alien with blue hair?" she clarified.

Suddenly, I realized Ace had been standing beside me the whole time. I jumped, and almost hit him with my elbow.

"I'm not an alien!" Ace wined, loud enough for her to hear.

"You never denied you weren't gay." I could hear Lilly's barely muffled laugh in the background. I saw blank shock cross Ace's face.

"Lilly, that was so NOT funny." I hung up on her, she was being such a piss-off. When I turned back to Ace, he was gone just as quietly as he had left.
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MayApple wrote:Have fun Ben...

What would have happened if Ace overheard what Lilly said (Maitea's POV):

"So your marrying a half-gay alien with blue hair?" she clarified.

Suddenly, I realized Ace had been standing beside me the whole time. I jumped, and almost hit him with my elbow.

"I'm not an alien!" Ace wined, loud enough for her to hear.

"You never denied you weren't gay." I could hear Lilly's barely muffled laugh in the background. I saw blank shock cross Ace's face.

"Lilly, that was so NOT funny." I hung up on her, she was being such a piss-off. When I turned back to Ace, he was gone just as quietly as he had left.


BAHAHAHA! That would have been hilarious!

Hehe. He's more into the chicks. Namely Maitea. Of course, no matter what he said, I doubt he could have gotten away without being insulted by Lilly anyway...
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That made me laugh, May.
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Hey, Kay, (ha, that rhymes) thanks for letting me in this so late... :D
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