Hey review my poem

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OK so I submitted something in yws after a decade (not really)
And no one's commenting!!
I know not even a day has passed since I posted it but I want a review on it fast!
So please review my post I'll treat you with a buffet!
The topics 'An ode to my love' (I know am not very innovative with titles, maybe that's why people haven't commented on my post.)

Hi! A general request like this isn't really how Will Review for Food works. Look at different threads, see who reviews your style of poetry, and ask them for a review. If you say there's a deadline (publication, a contest) then they'll get to you quickly. But you still might have to wait, even if you ask. Just be patient.

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