Longer work needs reviewed! (Will review in return)

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Hey everyone. I am not 100% if this goes here, so sorry to mods if this post end up being trouble to you. Anyway, I know that longer pieces often scare some of you guys away, but I could really use a few reviews. I am really trying to make it as a writer, and need to know where I stand with my readers. I am sure that the YWS will rise to the challenge, considering that I am offering my own reviews in return.

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General requests like this aren't the best. Poke around Will Review and ask if anybody does longer works. :) Also watch how many requests they have. If they have a lot, best not to ask for a long request.

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