Untitled (Prologue)

So this doesn't exactly belong in the sci-fi place...but it doesn't exactly belong here. I guess we'll figure out where it goes...But for now...this goes here. If anyone has any ideas for the title, please PM me.

Prologue:

Nobody is sure how this happened, but, unfortunately, it DID happen. Many people believe it's aliens. Stupid, stupid people. My theory is that this happened because somebody was buried in the "Pet Sematary" and came back to life with no soul. Just like in some kind of weird horror movie, based off of a Stephen King book.

My name is Valentina Evans. I am 14 years old. I've been surviving for the past year and a half. I am, in fact, alone. All I know for sure, is that this is not the end.

Good solid beginning, the problem? It's too short! It's not a bad thing, if I were you I would build from there. Why is Valentina alone? What exactly happened? Can it be fixed? These are the questions you're leaving us with. Though it is short you're leaving the readers wanting more because they don't know what happened.

I look forward to seeing what happens next. Maybe Valentina will find a friend? Who knows, we'll find out when you write more.

Well thank you. I'll definitely take that into consideration. Well I was planning something else, like the chapters to bounce from the present day, to the past, like flashbacks. And "what happened" would come slowly to the readers.