Uh hi there, I'm new here!

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I'm VERY new, and I just submitted my first story to here. There's gonna be a sequel, but I don't think anyone really likes my story... :smt047 It's called The Three Friends.

I'm from the U.S.A. :pirate1: Wait... we don't have pirates! Or do we... :smt118
What the heck does WTH mean?!




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Hey there!

Im Jasmine..which isnt my name...or is it??? Anyway, Welcome to YWS. Its super cool here and Im sure you'll be as obseesed with it as I am in a couple weeks. :) Im from New York City and I like...live there! Im gonna go read and review your story in a couple minutes but before that questions!

So what's up?
Do you write alot?
What grade are you in?
What state do you live in?
Do you like shish kabobs?

PM me if you ever want to talk!

~Jasmine Bells~
Peace, Love, Writing and Insanity

P.S. Arr! Of course we have pirates! Im part of a pirate gang...called the PIRATE gang :)
I
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Hi MegaLiz!

I'm Lava and first of all welcome to YWS. *Gives you a welcome huggle* :) It's a great place that will help you improve your writing skills, and meet new friends. The best way is to head to the chat room or comment on blogs. Hope you'll find us an awesome bunch of people! :)


MegaLizardLord wrote:I'm VERY new, and I just submitted my first story to here. There's gonna be a sequel, but I don't think anyone really likes my story

How can you be sure no one likes it? I'm sure it's good. :) You've got believe in yourself.
Some critiques might sound harsh but remember, in the end, it's all to help you out to become a better writer.

So besides that, PM me if you've got any questions. You could always bug me about anything. :)

Cheers,
~Lava
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Hiya, Megatron! Welcome to YWS!

You already posted your story? That means you found your way around the site with no problem, I assume. Which is wonderful!

There are most certainly pirates in the USA! They're just doing a good job at not revealing themselves. ;D

So what do you do in your spare time? Besides writing, of course! Music or art? A sport maybe? What's your favorite pie? Pie is a common topic around these parts. <3.14

Enjoy your stay here at YWS! If you have any questions at all, feel free to send me a PM. I'm more than happy to assist. :D
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Hiya, welcome to YWS! Oh my gosh, I definitely want to know your favorite pie. And, you seem to be a pirate person... what would you do If I mentioned that I am a ninja?

Definitely post more about yourself! (And it better include your favorite pie)

I'm sure people will like your story-- just give it a chance.

Anyway, welcome! I know you'll enjoy it here.

--Dreamy
Honey, you should see me in a crown.



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