Just Because I'm Different.

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Just because im different.
You have to still care.
Just because im weird,
Doesn’t mean I cant bear,
The ridicule, and pain.
And not see the light again.

I guess your nieve
And you just cant see
The person inside, trying to break free.

I guess you don’t mind,
Its all good to me.
Just friggin walk away,
And leave me be.

For if you shun me or hate me
Screw me, or fake me.
I will never be.
Like you.
Beauty Lies Within The Beholder.

Maybe The Beholder Should Leave, And Let Me Feel Beautiful.




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good job! i appreciate your use of punctuation. i like how you expressed the feelings of different people everywhere. (i am also weird :) )the only thing i have to say is,
Just friggin' walk away
there should be an apostrophy here.
thats it.
O thin men of Haddam,/Why do you imagine golden birds?/Do you not see how the blackbird/Walks around the feet/Of the women about you?
-Wallace Stevens




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thank youuu!!! :]
Beauty Lies Within The Beholder.

Maybe The Beholder Should Leave, And Let Me Feel Beautiful.



If you know what the tip of a shoelace is called, Congratulations, you watched Phineas and Ferb!
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