Mimi! I like this. Your handwriting is beautiful and I like this song anyway. ^^ I agree with Kat; your angle is great. I like how it focuses in on the last bit of the quote (my favorite part anyway). However, I think there's too much empty space down at the bottom, but that can easily be cropped out. *clicks the like button*
"You can love someone so much...But you can never love people as much as you can miss them."
wow I think it"s beautiful! I wish I had a camera and the skills to take pictures like that but I don't... the only problem that i had was the fact that the attachment was slightly enormous and i couldn't see the whole thing i had to keep scrolling everywhere to get a really good view but doubt that's you're fault by the way, you're taste in music is awesome i love three days grace
OMG! This is so similar to what I'd done with the same song. No kidding. I swear, if I find the pic, I'll show it to you. *Likes* I'd written it using liquid eyeliner on my hand and made the font all goth-ish. Anyway, 'nuff of that and onto this photo:
1.Awesome angle. Good lighting too. 2.You could maybe crop a bit of the bottom where its blurs a little too much. It would give a better effect. 3.It is slightly over-exposed at the top part of the picture. Try to edit it, if you can. 4. This is the major thing that's been bugging me : the background. If it had been all black it would've been fine; but that orange-ish patch is terribly distracting. I'm really forcing my eyes to look down.
Anyway, awesome work. I love the lines, handwriting and the photo. Good Job! Cheers, ~Lava
~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
Hello eye am AspinringAuthorA..M. Please excuse my insanity.
Now, about your picture. It is quite nice. I like how the writing contrasts from light to dark every other line. Did you achieve it through lighting, or did you write down the lyrics in different colors?
Those are rhetorical questions by the way.
I have nothing against your photo except that it is much too large.
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"Jesus said to her, “I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die. Do you believe this?” -John 11:25-26
A lot of people are experimenting like this lately and it's clear that your's stands out from the rest. The light and angle is perfect. I think your handwriting is beautiful as well. Perhaps one suggestion would be to go one step further in being experimental and pack some originality in it. The talent for photography you have is excellent so keep it up.
You call this "attempted" photography??? It's awesome! I like it a lot!
It gives us a bit of an edge as to what the song is about. Yes, I've heard "Pain", and I absolutely adore 3DG, but for those who haven't...well... Let's just say that this really delves into the inner meanings of the song and show us a bit of what may be going through the photographer's head at that particular moment in time.
Fabulous perspective, and I love the writing style and lighting. Thumbs up!
"Neglect not the gift that is in thee, which was given thee by prophecy, with the laying on of the hands of the presbytery." Timothy 4:14 KJV
Hi, I critized the last one of yours a little but I have no complaints about this one. The only thing "attempted" about this is the fact that the sizing's kinda off. This is really great; the lighting and color is awesome. The colors are really rich and the angle's great. Nice handwriting also.
Reading is one form of escape. Running for your life is another. ~Lemony Snicket
I agree with what others have said. This is pretty darn great! I love it! The contrast of the picture is really, really good. Well done.
I also have to agree with everyone else though on the size. You can't really see the whole photo because it's so big. I would love to see the entire picture. All you need to do is resize it. There's a thread on how to resize photos in this forum, in case you're not sure how to do it.
Overall, I loved this! All you need to do is make it slightly smaller
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by the way, you're taste in music is awesome i love three days grace 
