Inspired by Hundertwasser

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These are a few drawings I created, all inspired by Hundertwasser. If you could comment, that would be really helpful, as I would like something more than 'oh that's nice'. Be as critical as you like! After I get enough comments about each drawing, I was planning to change them into paintings.
THANK YOU AND ENJOY!!!!
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Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.




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OMG these are amazing! if not slightly blurred but i love them! You could make the lines bolder by using wax crayons (if i remember correctly) unless you already have... if you have i can't see very well. very colourful and i love the swirls!

I don't do very good reviews but meh, i love love love it! the only thing i'd say is hunterwasser makes it so you can tell what things are, but they just look use slightly different techniques. and have you used watercolours? they look the best in hunterwasser...

Overall i absolutely love these! Keep doing more hunterwasser, i look forward to seeing some more of your artwork!

P.S i think that the bottom two are the best... they just seem more colourful and better quality. the top too seem slightly messy if you could brush that up. :) keep drawing.
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Thanks a billion!
I plan to start doing paintings instead of drawings! Thanks for the comment, it's cool and helpful!
I don't have a scanner, so I had to rake pictures of these and upload them to the computer. My camera isn't that good in quality!
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Hiya Tam!

Gosh, these are really good! I love your work and your style. Did you use pastels? I could help you out a lot more if you could give a theme/title to each.
Anyway, let's get nitpicky. Going clockwise from top-left.

1. I don't think you meant it to that blurry but in its own way, it does have a good effect. :) I like the central black thing. I'm not sure what it is though.

2.This is my least favourite because the colors don't really blend in, neither do they pop out. I like the top-right corner of it with the buildings(?) The rainbow-like thing in the center seems weird and undefined. The pencils seem a bit flexible, if you ask me. Rigidity and bold outlines/coloring would work better.

3.This is good. I like the girl in the center. But, I also think you could have given her a more transparent hair and elongated the head a wee bit more. The swirl sort of distracts me a lot; maybe you could just make an outline of a swirl and not fill it in. You could give a few defining bold lines, if you think it would look fine.

4.My favourite! Love the colors, the blending. Can't find anything to niptick, maybe someone better than me can find out. :)

Anyway, awesome job. Tell me, if you finish painting any of them.
Cheers,
~lava
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