Hello Or Goodbye?

Holding hands, Laughing and Kissing.
Just a normal day, At least that's what we thought.
The beach is quite like every morning before but as
we walk down the sandy beach there's something different.
There are people down by the ocean..."Alec its after hours no one is supposed to be here righ..." I started to say and that's when i lost him, The love of my life..

"Kelley Alec's here get out of bed!" I heard my mom yell from down the hallway. I rolled out of bed slipped on my slippers. I started towards the window opened up the blinds and let the sun seep through my room letting me know it was Saturday, and time for work. My mom was at the kitchen table reading the paper as usual and Alec was waiting by the door with my jacket and one hand and the car keys in the other. "Good morning sleepy head" Alec said in a sarcastic voice. "Morning, Bye mom see you around six o'clock tonight" I said in a rush to get out the door. Alec handed me my coat as we stepped out to the car but once we were in the car, well lets just say that's the day when it all started...

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Holding hands, Laughing and Kissing.
Just a normal day, At least that's what we thought.
The beach is quite like every morning before but as
we walk down the sandy beach there's something different. The beach is different but different how? Why are the people there? Maybe put a lil bit more description in there?
There are people down by the ocean..."Alec its after hours no one is supposed to be here righ..." I started to say and that's when i lost him, The love of my life..

"Kelley, Alec's here get out of bed!" I heard my mom yell from down the hallway. I rolled out of bedand or "," whichever one you want slipped on my slippers. I started towards the window opened up the blinds and let the sun seep through my room letting me know it was Saturday, and time for work. My mom was at the kitchen table reading the paper as usual and Alec was waiting by the door with my jacket and one hand and the car keys in the other.What does Alec look like?

ALWAYS a paragrpagh space when someone new starts talking. The last one was the mom, now a new paragraph for Alec"Good morning sleepy head" Alec said in a sarcastic voice.

"Morning, Bye mom see you around six o'clock tonight" I said in a rush to get out the door. Alec handed me my coat as we stepped out to the car but once we were in the car, well lets just say that's the day when it all started...

***Well, all in all I liked it, though it was a tad too short for my taste. Try bein a lil bit more descriptive though. You{the narroator} may know what Alec looks like and why the beach is so different but the reader doesn't. Eh, you don't have to listen to my advice though if you dont want too

This overall flow is great! I liked this

Hi! This is a good start, but you need...more. We need to know more about who Alec is, etc. And you told us you put your slippers on, but you didn't bother telling us you got dressed. Did you go outside in your pyjamas, because that's the image it conjoured up for me. You also need to work on your grammar - more commas so it's easier to read. Help the reader figure out when to pause. You also have a few capitals a bit randomly, so be careful to check your work thoroughly to prove to us that you love it (because if you don't love it, why should the reader?) So all in all, a pretty good start, just expand a bit and check it thoroughly. Have fun!

Great! But maybe add more, like what everything looks like, and take a bit more time. Other than that, I like it a lot! I hope you keep writing, I want to here more.