Kinda hard to tell because the picture is so dark, but I think you did a good job with the depth of the drawing- with me, depth (in drawing ) is pure torture.
And, for criticizing purposes, if you were to make the lump that pokes out of the side of his mouth a little less pronounced , it'd probably give it a smoother look.
Overall, great job! Keep drawing, 'cause I'd like to see more!
~Mel
"Don't say 'the old lady screamed'- bring her on and let her scream." -Mark Twain
Writing is like traveling- you never know what's going to happen until you get there.
Hi Flower! That's a good drawing that you've done. It's a pretty good work, but I've a few suggestions for you.
1. Face Structure: Well, this hasn't really come out all that well. If you look at Cena's pictures you will notice that his face (even in side views) don't have those extreme bumps that you've drawn. 2.Eyes: Your eye basics is good but the eyes have two different expressions on them. In drawings, the best eyes are always the same. 3.Nose: Pretty good job. Not much of nitpicking here. 4.Cap: You should add some shading below the cap to give the viewer a feel of depth. 5.Mouth: It seems a little lopsided. I think you're trying to achieve a grim expression;for that, try drawing the base as a straight line. Practice a bit more and you should be doing it real well.
Keep drawing. Cheers, ~Lava
~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
I would strengthen the outlines of this. Unless the camera detracts that much from the picture, the outer lines look kind of weak, and while it's good to not have super sharp features, I think you need to distinguish. The symbol on his cap appears crooked, too, and a little off dimension with the rest of the picture. I agree with Kate that his jawline needs to be a little smoother. Other than that, you did an impressive job.
June
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
Hello, I think it's a really cool picture, I remember JOhn Cena quite well, so I know who I'm talking about. I think its superb, one thing you might want to improve on is making his face less long, other thatn that... Amazing!
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
but I think you did a good job with the depth of the drawing- with me, depth (in drawing 
) is pure torture.
, it'd probably give it a smoother look.
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