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"Love is just a word. Why does everyone take it so seriously? We all take it so seriously because its not just a word its a way of life and everyday thing...And love isn't always great."

"Peers are people you wave to in the hall ways..Friends are people you hang out with on the weekend..and Best friend there the ones you're with 24/7 day and night and the ones who never leave you're side no matter what you do"

" love is a a word that we most adore....but it is not always amazing and it often does hurt. But we still continue to find love hoping that some day it will be true"

(I will have more COMMING SOON)
Last edited by xXJuggaletteXx on Mon May 10, 2010 3:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Hey and welcome to YWS!
-- Note: Run spell check before posting --
Okay, have a quick revision of grammar and typos so we can read your quotes easier.
Also your first quote doesn't make sense to me, you're mixing things up and then contradicting yourself. I'd revise this.
Hope this helps,
Ben




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Hey, Juggalette!

Are these quotes by you? It would be good if you cleared that up. Just, you know, put "[quote] -- xXJuggaletteXx", so we can be sure.

There's a good message and meaning behind these quotes and everyone can see that. However, they're a bit long, which makes it harder to remember them. I'm sure you've noticed that many famous quotes are quite compact and there's no useless words in them. I would suggest that you tried to make the quotes more concise, so it'll be friendlier for the eye and easy to remember. If a quote is very wordy and complex, there's the danger people will forget it soon, and that would be a pity, considering that you want your quotes to touch people.

Quotes are important things, and I'm glad you've decided to share some of yours!


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