invisible girl

Invisible girl

Verse 1

I see you walking down the street every single morning. I smile at you but you never notice.
We could be a team we could be a star we can knock them all down cuz that’s just who we are.

Chorus

Im just invisible girl and that’s just who I am,
I see you at school with all the girls giving me evils,
And as I wave to you you don’t notice cuz im invisible girl and that’s just who I am.

Verse 2

Your at the beach with all of your friends and im on the bench thinking how happy we could be, then you notice me and smile that beautiful smile, then I realize it the girl behind me.

Chorus

Im just invisible girl and that’s just who I am,
I see you at school with all the girls giving me evils,
And as I wave to you you don’t notice cuz im invisible girl and that’s just who I am.




Verse 3

I like the way your everything I ever wanted, I like your scurffy hair, I like your blue eyes, I like your incredible laugh I like just who you are.


Chorus

Im just invisible girl and that’s just who I am,
I see you at school with all the girls giving me evils,
And as I wave to you you don’t notice cuz im invisible girl and that’s just who I am.

Verse 4

Where at the school dance and im a wall flower. I see you walk over and you say…. Do you wanna dance.

Chorus 2

Im not invisible girl and I like it this way. You look me in the eyes and say I love you you’re the prettiest thing in this entire room
Im not invisible girl
Im not invisible

Explain HOW you feel about him not noticing..."you walking down the street every single morning. I smile at you but you never notice." Maybe it could be longer? Good start!

yes but if it where to b longer it would b out of tune. it just wouldn't fit the tune rite.

I'd just like to point out that even in lyrics, proper spelling and grammar are a plus. Especially the spelling you may want to go through and fix it.

I agree with OverEasy. A few other things besides spelling:

then you notice me and smile that beautiful smile, then I realize it the girl behind me.

I think you may have meant "it's" but either way, it's still awkward and breaks the rythm.

One other thing I had a problem with: How can other girls give someone "evils." I mean, seriously! That doesn't even make sense!

That said, I liked this song and think with a little more work it could be quite touching.

See you around!

Lupis

lol hey kim hows it going? im at school and im really bored so im gonna reveiw this

kimithy wrote:Invisible girl

Verse 1

I see you walking down the street every single morning. I smile at you but you never notice.
We could be a team we could be a star we can knock them all down cuz that’s just who we are.

Chorus

Im just invisible girl and that’s just who I am,
I see you at school with all the girls giving me evils, apparently evils isn't a universal term. some people dont know what it means so maybe u should change that
And as I wave to you you don’t notice cuz im invisible girl and that’s just who I am.

Verse 4

Where where? shouldn't it be we were or we're or something? at the school dance and im a wall flower. I see you walk over and you say…. Do you wanna dance.

anyways what happened to the better version we did together? i still got a copy of that at home. c u tonight... i think. xxx