Some people just don't listen

hey this poem was written within about ten seconds...i was feeling rather frustrated as you can probably tell. there is no grammar...so if you want to suggest some please go ahead! and sorry about the...well not really language but i guess some could call it that... any comments are welcome!

It irritates me beyond belief
When people in the wrong
Argue with no logic or thought
They simply don’t hear your side
They blunder and shout and don’t think about
Anything they’re saying
They act like they’re in the right
Then grin smugly as if they’ve given
An argument which is irrevocable
While they’re actually talking crap

T

Hi! This made me laugh. I really like it, too, even though it is a bit rough. I'll try to add some grammar to where I think it would fit.

Tranquility wrote:
It irritates me beyond belief#FF0000 ">,
When people in the wrong
Argue with no logic or thought#FF0000 ">.
They simply don’t hear your side#FF0000 ">,
They blunder and shout#FF0000 ">, and don’t think about
Anything they’re saying#FF0000 ">.
They act like they’re in the right#FF0000 ">,
Then grin smugly as if they’ve given
An argument which is irrevocable#FF0000 ">.
While they’re actually talking crap#FF0000 ">.

Okay, I hope that helps. If you would like me to review anything else, just let me know.

I chuckled as well. *chuckles more*
Nice little poem. Good way to vent anger!Hm. That's probably a bit more effective than yelling at people. Write poetry about them...
Nice job.For a ten second piece, this was amazing. I totally know what you mean.

--Dreamy

So, I chuckled as well. XD.
Hi, there, Tranq.

Good idea to write a poem instead of actually screaming your head off at them. Okay, so basically grammar, and one line...er...the second or third to last one didn't make sense to me. Well, for making this in ten seconds this is pretty good.
Taataaa.
-Miss Mizz

I liked it! I thought it was a cute little poem. You know, for being irritated and all. This explains almost exactly what I feel like when I argue with someone.

The only thing I thought was that it could stand to be a little longer, and that you could work on it a tiny bit more. But then I kept reading it over, and I rather like it the way it is.