Dreams

Dreams are the things in life that motivate us to keep going. To push through whatever pain there may be, and to make the best of even the worst situations. Sometimes, there are the people in the world known as "dream crushers" or "bubble bursters" that try their hardest to conform you into the tiny little mold of whatever they want you to be. Heads up: Those are the people that themselves were not able to fulfill or complete their own dream, so they try and make you feel as though you won't be able to either. Stick through it. Toughen up and be the best you can be (cliche, i know). You were made to do whatever you want to do. If your all time biggest goal and dream in life is to become a certified moose whisperer, you make that happen. If you want to climb Mount Everest, go for it. Don't let anything or anyone hold you back. Because no matter how stupid or crazy it sounds, it's what's right in your mind, and nothing can stop you. We are UNSTOPPABLE people. What's my dream? To work with doctors without borders, amnesty international, the American Red Cross, WWF, Feed the Children, or any of the truly outstanding and remarkable organizations helping the people in the world. That's my dream, but what's my goal? Yes, there is a difference. My goal is what i plan to do for my career and for practically the rest of my life. My goal in life, is to be an artist. My mom told me, "that's not a job. that's a hobby." Dream crusher? I love her, but you can't tell someone they can't do or be something just because you don't find it "acceptable". I am a firm believer in doing whatever you want to do, whenever you want to do it. Feel free to let it all out. Tell me your dreams and goals because I, I;m not a dream crusher, I'm a dream maker.

Wow that really moving. Good job!!!!!

Yes, that is a good job, but I do have two small things to change. I would have liked it to be in three "paragraphs", because as I read it out loud, there seemed distinct separations: after "We are unstoppable people", and then again before the goals.
Also, you should capitalize Doctors Without Borders and Amnesty International, because these are names.

Nice article. I'd suggest you get rid of the big text and colours because it makes it seem like you're trying too hard to get the point across. If the writing isn't powerful enough as it is, then changes need to be made.

Also, split it into paragraphs to make it easier to read.

And don't say (cliche I know) after using a cliche. That doesn't make it forgiveable. You're just drawing attention to it. It's like circling a pimple with a black texta. Why? Try and avoid cliches altogether, and if you must use one, don't put a big sign saying "look I'm using a cliche"

I agree whole heartedly with what you're saying. Fortunately my family have been very supportive of my goal to become a published writer. I wish you all the best in being an artist (and it can be a career. I would know, my mum's an artist).

Ta ta