a black and white fairy tale.

LOL..while i wasn't able to sleep last night, i edited this pic and added a quote of my own. it's a bit small and dark, though. and i need reviews. thanks.

OMG i absolutely love this! The quote is really good and makes my jaw drop open! The bubbles are really good and the person makes the picture look great. i feel there is something missing, but i guess that's the whole point! well done.

-lizzie

iCarlyfan wrote:OMG i absolutely love this! The quote is really good and makes my jaw drop open! The bubbles are really good and the person makes the picture look great. i feel there is something missing, but i guess that's the whole point! well done.

-lizzie

thanks lizzie.
well..this is actually the product of an insomniac's imagination. i appreciated your review.

`telle.

Hi Telle!

That's a cute picture, the lines are cute too. But it sort of ruins the effect of the picture which would've looked good on its own.
This is a good picture, and here's a little to help you out (hopefully.)
1.It's a good angle, I like it.
2.The picture is slightly out of focus, make sure the cam is held steady.
3.There is too much light on the girl's hand which makes it too bright and distracting.
4.Good slightly blurred background.

Anyway, keep it up!
~Lava

lavabubblingout wrote:Hi Telle!

That's a cute picture, the lines are cute too. But it sort of ruins the effect of the picture which would've looked good on its own.
This is a good picture, and here's a little to help you out (hopefully.)
1.It's a good angle, I like it.
2.The picture is slightly out of focus, make sure the cam is held steady.
3.There is too much light on the girl's hand which makes it too bright and distracting.
4.Good slightly blurred background.

Anyway, keep it up!
~Lava

thanks lava.
i'll try to get good pics next time. i appreciated this.

`telle.

Hi Tella! Well, I'm not art reviewer, so I'll just throw in my two cents, okay?

The only think that set me off a bit on this picture were the words that were written across the picture. First, it draws the attention away from the picture, but rather to the words, and it's just on top of it! So, maybe try to put them smaller on a corner or something?

Other than that, beautiful picture. The angle is magnificent.

- Kat =D

Hiya.

I really like the picture, but I feel like it is being over-run with words. I suggest lightening the color of the words to a light gray, or just delete them. I think the main focus of this should be the picture, and the words should be at the top in a no-so-noticeable fade.

I think the picture is beautiful, though!

Classy

This is amazing. I absolutely, positively love it. But what Classy (hey, Captain!) said really makes sense. Lighten the words to a more gray color, and the words should be a little less noticeable and at the top or something. The words really filled me up with...um, a missing-ness? But I smiled. It's a great quote, you've made up. Anyhoo, nice.
Tata.
-Miss Mizz

Hey again Telle!
Obviously the best part of this has got to be the message. It's fantastic! I hope you made that up yourself because it has a huge punch of effect and it makes the whole picture worthwhile.
One thing I would say about it is that your should make the wording alot less in-your-face. It just overlaps the picture and makes it look messy. I think we need to see more of that fabulously well-chosen picture of yours and less of the in-your-face messy font. The message in it is fabulous, but the font and picture-cover are disastrous.
Other than that it's incredibly hard not to love it!
Brilliant work!
Ben.

Hey, gotta say this was a really good idea you had. And it was executed pretty well.

Although, the words kinda DO take a bit away from the pic or maybe it's the lighting. Also, it may be easy to tell something is missing, I would add another chair next to the girl to make it a bit more with longing.

Overall, though, it's pretty good.

hey, this picture is pretty cute, it's very adorable and sweet.

The picture is slightly out of focus, make sure the cam is held steady.

I think that even if the picture is slightly out of focus it's still a good picture. Sometimes I like pictures that are out of focus or slightly blurry, it gives them a weird feeling/look. But that, of course, is personal opinion

Now, I think I would have liked the picture if the words weren't so overpowering. My suggestion is that if you really want to keep the quote (which I do like) then maybe make it smaller or something.

Good job, this is a cute picture!

:KaatiieBugg

Hello,

This was a great picture with a great quote, Well Done!! I loved the bubbles, they were beautiful the only problem I have is the girls arm, it is a little too bright and it kept grabbing my attention when I wanted to look at the bubbles and see them as the main focus. Other than this though it was fabulous A very beautiful image. Well Done.

Keep Editing (and making up quotes)
~Lydia

Wow!! really nice!!
And i can see it is quite popular..:]
keep it up!!


-BG-