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*I thought I would try a school storybook, but with a twist. Doesn't everyone dream of being royalty, or rich or famous, just once in your life? Well here's your chance. Fame. Fortune. Power. Beyond you're wildest dreams.*

school Motto in Latin/english:
Virtus , Fides , Veneratio , Verum , Vires
Valor, Faith, Honor, Truth, Strength

plot: Vires Academy, a school for the elite of the elite. A place that the world doesn't know exists. This is the school that the future rulers of the world attend. Set on a large uncharted island in the middle of the Pacific. A special Neutral zone where no country holds sway.

You are one of the students at this school, being groomed to lead the world. Everyone who is anyone comes here from Royalty to the children of presidents, billionares, and even high class criminals. Entree into the prestigious academy is a guarentee for future success.

Then things go horribly wrong, the entire school is taken hostage by terrorists, they are determined to use you as hostages to bend you're parents to their will. Or brainwash you into their cause whichever comes first. They have destroyed the planes, and the boats are anchored far off shore. You are trapped, and the only way out is to turn and face those you are running from.

You must prove yourself worthy of both you're heritage and legacy.

Rules: The rules are the same as usual no god moding no killing off characters, as a bonus ABSOLUTELY NO BODYGUARDS!!! they are banned from the school.

character: Just follow this character profile.

name-
age-
gender-
rank- (Just say who your parents are here.)
grade- (This is an elite boarding school everything from kindergarden straight through college.)
appearance-
history-
personality-
other-

name- Kainen Shamar (means 'promise keeper' goes by Kain)
age- 19
gender- male
rank- Crown Prince of Sarq
grade- college freshman

appearance- http://media.photobucket.com/image/blac ... y.jpg?o=35

history- Kain is the product of generations of anscestral meddling and inbreeding between the royal houses of the african and asian sheiks. And as the result of a lack of children and some very convoluted family trees, Kainen is heir to no less then half a dozen kingdoms. In the future he will control a vast portion of the worlds oil fields.

Always aware of the responsibility to his people, Kain has pushed himself hard in everything. He's has learned both the ancient and modern traditions of his peoples. Top class in academics and sports. Proficient in several forms of hand to hand combat, can wield a scimitar as well as a gun with relative ease. The irritating kind of person who does everything and everything he does, he does excellently.

All in all Kainen is a natural born leader. However his mother died young so he has grown a bit wild. As a side note, through his french mother, Kainen is a direct descendent of Napolean.

personality- Kain is young, hot tempered, and headstrong. Fiercely prideful and independent he prefers to either take the lead or dance to the beat of his own drum. However, mindful of his position he has learned diplomacy, it just isn't second nature to him.

other- Up for love, maybe someone could be his fiancee in an arranged marriage.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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name- Thomas Anthony (Tom)

age- 18

gender- Male

rank- Son of a US Republican Senator.

grade- Senior

appearance- http://media.photobucket.com/image/male ... ro.jpg?o=7

history- When Thomas was born his father was already a well known politician. Because of this he hardly knew his father while he was growing up and when he was elected into the House of Representatives things got worse. Tom was forced to practice politics himself even though he didn't want to. When his father was elected a senator Tom was forced to attend Vires Academy against his will starting his high school years. For the past four years he's hated his father.

personality- Straight forward. Tom's not afraid of a challenge and he likes to meet life head on. He's not so much a leader as he is an inspirational person.

other- Up for love. Took boxing lessons to relieve stress towards his father.
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Woa this seems cool. Terrorists, how delightful.

Name: Arliana Haymond ( goes by Arli )
Age: 17
Gender: female
Rank: Parents are the king and queen of Britian,(thank them for her kick-ass accent) making her the crowned princess.
Grade: Junior
History: She was born into royality, destined to be rich. Her parents always gave her everything she wanted and never said no. Despite her dream life she's always wanted differnt. She's always hated the idea of everyone gawking over her just because of her parents birth right. All she's ever wanted was a normal life, but in a world where everyone knows your name its pretty hard. She's been rebelling against everything royal since third grade.
Persona: She's nice and sweet, but hates when people give her special attention. She's mostly laid back and mellow, trying not to draw attention to herself.
Apperance: Long, black, layered hair and dark blue eyes. Her eyes are so blue they appear as purple. She's short for her age, standing at five feet five inches. She's earned the nickname pixie for her small, pixie-like frame.
Other: hates her accent (How could she?!) and is up for love and friendship.
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Name- Ebony Knight

Age- 17

Gender- Female

Rank- She made her own name as broadways number one star, and is kind of at the bottom of the class system of this school and is in it mostly by chance.

Grade- Senior Year of high school

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History- She was born in a small town and through her talent was able to make it big on Broadway. She now is a multi-millionaire who is taking a break of the stage to study.

Personality- She is very dramatic but sweet. She changes emotions as often as the weather and has a very unpredictable personality but all-in-all is a sweet girl.

Other- She has no official title, but is a great fighter because of the karate classes she took to be in Kick-and-Love, the musical.
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*I thought this was cool. Sorry for unbalancing the boy to girl ratio but where's the fun if there's no evil little girl in it.*

Name: Isabel Teroski

Age: 14

Gender: female

Rank: daughter of the president of a top underworld smuggling business

Grade: junior year of college

Appearance: http://www.onetalentsource.com/pmembers ... ne_050.jpg

History: Her father sent her to Vires Academy at age three. She is what some people call a prodigy child, she was learning Algebra at age six. So she practically is a prodigy child. During the years in Vires Academy she has spent her time learning the art of technology. She is the computer whiz of the Academy excelling most professors. She can hack into ANY database, a few times she has stolen the USA government classified files just to bring pride to her father. Unfortunately her father pays very little attention to her, her mother died when she was born. He does love her but does not know how to show this compassion being in the line of smuggling business for so long.

She has taken her father's side of the art of criminal business, although looking nice and sweet she can handle a crime with utter perfectness. She has never gotten caught doing a shady act, but the teachers keep hushed up because she is also their source. NO she does not smuggle drugs. Although she is a geek and always looking sweet and innocent, she is an expert in Muay Thai- the most aggressive and dangerous martial arts in the world.
She does not use guns or rifles often.

Personality: Isabel is manipulator. She can persuade anyone to do anything. She lies very easily and believably. She relies only on her computers and laptop that she carries all the time with her. If you want something done you go to her, ask anything and she'll do it but with a price. She's a bit of a perfectionist. She has a hard time making friends.

Other: Up for friendship.
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When can we start?
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*Alright we can start now, people can still join as the story progresses. Just remember to ask. Also can Kain and Isabel be friends, since their both in college? She appeals to his twisted sense of humor.

We start right after the terrorist invade. By the way this island is huge, large enough for a small town, several different campuses, a sports stadium and there are large tracts of wilderness areas for those who want go guerilla. :D *

Kainen Shamar (Kain)-

Kain crouched low to the ground, hidden between a pair of cars. In the distant he heard the faint chatter of machine gun fire. He glanced up and saw smoke rising from the airstrip which meant the planes had been destroyed.

The tread of footsteps drew closer. He slipped out the bowie knife he'd snuck onto the island. Tensing he jumped out prepared to attack the soldier. He stopped in midstrike when he saw it was another student. Relieved he grinned openly.

*This can be anyone, the terrorist infiltrated the school staff and called an assembly so the entire student body is roughly in the same area.*
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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*Arliana*

I let out a terribly girlie shriek as some guy jumped in front of me, wielding a knife.
" What the-" he put the knife down and I exhaled with relief. Though I was clearly in the safe range my knees wouldn't stop shaking.
" H-h-hello," I whispered, I could feel my eyes growing wider. He looked past me and suddenly pulled me to the ground, which resulted in another terribly girlie shriek.
" Would you cut that out," he hissed. I put my hand over my mouth. He mumbled something under his breath and sighed. " I'm Kain." He didn't even attempt to sound like he wasn't either A. Pissed B. Agravated or C. Both.
" I'm A-Arlie." He gave me an once over.
" Why are you shaking?" As if on cue more gun fire sounded from the school and I covered my ears. I shook so bad little waves coursed through my hair," Oh." He shook his head and I don't know if it was from disgust or pity, " Just calm down, Ahri."
" Arlie," I whispered looking down," it's Arlie." He actually looked embarrased.
" Right," he scratched his head," Arlie, got it." I tried to smile a bit to show it was okay but more gunfire inturrpted my words and forced me back into more violent shakes and quivers. I squeezed my eyes shut, wishing it all away.
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Tom leaned up against a building panting frantically. Looking at his left shoulder he noticed it was bleeding. "When in gods name?" A bullet had grazed his shoulder, but Tom was so scared he hadn't noticed. He tore a piece of his jacket off and tied the wound, it wasn't deep.

Slowly he peaked out of the alley way to survey the road. That's when he saw too people hiding under a car. "Hey, over hear!" Yelled Tom just loud enough for them to hear. A boy looked at him and Tom waved him over.

"What's your name?" Asked the boy once he arrived. He had a girl with him.

"Thomas, but call me Tom."

"Kain."

"I'm...Arlie."

"We have to get out of here," stated Tom.

"How, the strips been blown to pieces?" Replied Kain.

"Then for now we need to get out of here and find a place to hid." Kain nodded in agreement and started to walk down the alley way, but more gun shots could be heard in the distance and Arlie slumped to the ground. "Hey, are you alright?" Asked Tom kneeling down.

"Too...scared."

Sigh, Tom spun around and crouched, "Get on my back."

She nodded and climbed up onto his back, "Your hurt!"

"Don't worry about it. Kain, got any idea's?"
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Ebony

I must admit, these guys were well trained. The thought ran through my head as I foungth a slim boy, only maybe 18 years of age, using my karate to attempt to snap his neck. A pile with the two other guys that were either dead or unconsous had started to form. I finally caught the guys neck in my hand and in one quick movment snapped it. I ran to a nearby alleyway before any others showed up. To my surprise, a few other were already there.

"Who are you?" I asked.

"Arile Haymond, princess and future queen of england."

"Kain Shamar, future king of Sarq."

"Tomas Anthony. Son of a US senator."

I nodded.

“I am Ebony Knight. Performer on Broadway. No title.” With a wave of his arm Kain invited me to sit down.
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Kainen Shamar-

Kain shook his head in frustration. "I don't know about you guys, but I vote we raid the sports and food stores and then fade into the jungle." Whoever those guys were there were a lot of them. If we don't get out fast they'll lock the town down and we'll be trapped."

*All I can think of right now. Kain spends his summer vacations training with the Sarq military.*
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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*Arlie*

I climbed down off Tom's back and sunk down against a wall. Kain was saying something but I couldn't quite pay attention. I pulled my knees up to my chest and looked back and forth from the people in front of me.
" We'll be trapped," I shook myself out of my trance and looked up at Kain.
" Trapped?" He nodded and I fought to keep hold of my sanity. Why was this happening? I had no idea.
" That's a good idea, Kain," Ebony whispered, peaking outside the alley.
" What's a good idea," I asked just before Tom laughed.
" Wernt you listening," he gave me a strange look. I shook my head no. He petted my head and someone stiffled a laugh.
" Just follow, okay," Kain's voice seemed strained. I just nodded.
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Tom and Kain lead as they moved between buildings trying not to be noticed as best as the could. Thoughts raced through Toms head as the ran. What in god's name was going on?

Soon enough they reached the food store house near the west edge of the town with out any trouble. Tom took watch as Kain attempted to open the door. "Buggers stuck."

"Here let me help," said Tom grabbing onto the doors handle. "On the count of three. One, two, three!" On three they pulled, but at that same moment the door flung open on it's own and Tom and Kain fell to the ground. Looking up Tom saw a young Girl. "Who are you?"

"Isabel Teroski, and this is my hiding spot."

(Had to bring her in some how.)
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Kainen Shamar(Kain)-

Kain poked his head around Tom and grinned at the sight of the younger girl. "Well, well, well. If it isn't my favorite criminal type person. Are you comandeering all the food Izzy?

She scowled at him and snapped, "Don't call me Izzy, Kainen."

Glowering, he opened his mouth to retort when they heard the sound of cars coming round the corner. "Inside quick," Kain glanced warily over his shoulder.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

Please read and review my novel. The title is Fireborn. Here's the link.

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This looks interesting, may I join? :D
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